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awwww!!! loved this chapter! finally!!! they all three are in bed together. but now i look forward to harry and severus... : )

I was going to save this review for the end, but I changed my mind.

Out of everything you have posted on this site, Their Phoenix is my favourite. The way you've described the emotions at play is just incredible, the way that you've kept all the characters in character while putting them in a situation that is completely un-canonical (I think I just invented a word) is even more incredible. It's odd though. I've never been able to properly articulate an appropriate review, even if this is my absolute favourite piece of literature by you.

Keep being awesome!

once again a really great chapter... it always makes me sad to see the bar on the side of the page getting closer to the bottom of the screen cause then i know ill have to wait to see what happens next. lol.

Amazing new chapter, very hot ;) Thanks!

Nice chapter!
I like it that you chose Severus' POV when writing their sexual encounter, with Harry taking Draco. My personal guess was that Severus would be the first one bottoming for Harry, don't know why.
Still, it's so much about competition, will they at some time be able just to have lazy and comforting sex without worrying so much about being embarassed or being weak?
These days without your updates were hell :-)) Glad you're back.

Yay *gets out the cheering squad for Harry* I want to send him a congratulatory cake or something!

Hmm, so. Now, as Severus so rightly pointed out, Harry has had his turn at being looked after, and so has Draco... so I'm hoping it will be Severus' turn soon? ;)

They are so beautifully written together. x

Because I am female and have never known that point of view in intimacy, I often wonder about slash, and the truth or myth of its coupling. Yours felt both realistic and infinitely, delicately beautiful. You displayed aspects of fear and lust and uncertainty that really are present in a first time. As always, your story rings true and is a wondrous thing to watch unfold. It is like watching quicksilver molding in unexpected patterns without being influenced by anything but its own natural order of things. That is what reading you is like. Thank you.

~Mia

Another excellent chapter!

The bit with Narcissa was great. I especially loved when Harry embarassed Draco by referencing their sexual relationship in his conversation with her xD I can't wait to find out more about this Swanfair mystery!

I hope your move went smoothly and I'm glad you're back :D

oooo i love it so very much!

cant await more.

do you reckon you cuold do me a favour, i got some new fics out, needed and hidden secrets wanna check em out let us knw whats gd or bad or whatevr have you. your so good at writing id be honored if you did.

want more im anamoured with you fic.

thing is though after fris update itll be a while before i get to read this again as internet coverage will be non existant lol

loves SDL

missed u friday. good to see ur back. as usual absolutely loving the story. i like how u consistently progress with the story instead of speeding through it. u make sure that each chapter leads up to something that mey be addressed in the next chapter or future chapters. i very much appreciate it. good smut scene. i take it harry's fear of hurting his bondmates and insecurity in whether he's worthy of them are only part of the problem and that they may have some smex problems in the future before it smooths out? wonder what they'll do to severus during his turn. as always lookin forward to next time and already dreading the finale to this wonderful story. viva la vida!