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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have to much time for that, i cant wait for the snape focus either so ill live.
i wont have internet for a while, so i will review as soon as possible okay? by which poin there would have been at least 10 more, if you plan that many of course, on which i will have to read and review, i am looking forward to it.
i wont have internet for a while, so i will review as soon as possible okay? by which poin there would have been at least 10 more, if you plan that many of course, on which i will have to read and review, i am looking forward to it.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I certainly never liked Swanfair. She's a bitch.
Harry's thought about the three of them making their own business by training people against the Dark Arts - very promising. I hope you'll write some more about it.
I'm doomed. Your're about to finish the story. Only four more chapters to go, what shall I do when it's finished?
The answer is simple: start to read it all over again. :-) And, of course, there are your other stories...
This chapter made me laugh some times. I probably liked the scene with Harry training in the garden in the morning best. It was peaceful and showes some of their routine. It's not always about politics...
Harry's thought about the three of them making their own business by training people against the Dark Arts - very promising. I hope you'll write some more about it.
I'm doomed. Your're about to finish the story. Only four more chapters to go, what shall I do when it's finished?
The answer is simple: start to read it all over again. :-) And, of course, there are your other stories...
This chapter made me laugh some times. I probably liked the scene with Harry training in the garden in the morning best. It was peaceful and showes some of their routine. It's not always about politics...
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely addicted to this story. You have an amazing way with story telling and I hope you continue with it soon. I'm so looking forward to what happens next.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heh, i really like colben as a politician and i like how u've shown that harry makes a good politician. does he practice or is it his honesty that allows him to be a natural. i wanted to mention that i could actually see this as a definite alternative to the real ending. it's interesting to read this and actually see some of the images moving as if it were on television (just not as detailed in the smut part). til tuesday. viva la vida!
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what I'm talking about! That only thing that could possibly make it better would be for Severus to top Harry... Please tell that's going to happen soon! I'm begging and drooling for that!
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
....... *paces nervously* Severus is alright, isn't he? *more pacing*
Also, Swanfair is a pain in the backside. It's too much to hope she's just going to slope away, eh? ;)
And *cheers* yay for agendas. I really cannot wait to read that scene.
xx
Also, Swanfair is a pain in the backside. It's too much to hope she's just going to slope away, eh? ;)
And *cheers* yay for agendas. I really cannot wait to read that scene.
xx
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your Draco is delighting me more and more. Particularly the comment about how he SHOULD be the center of attention. I love Severus' new assurity. Harry's comfort. It is beautiful and graceful and vastly entertaining. Thank you.
~Mia
~Mia
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BOO-YAY!
I dont know if you'll understand or relate to this, but when i write fics with sex i find it soooo hard to really get the reader to feel the true amount of passion in each character. You do a wonderful job, and im glad you 'work-it' but not over do it. You leave enough room to really think instead of creating a wham-bam kinda feel to the entire romance. I love it!-LOVE IT!
I'm hooked!
I dont know if you'll understand or relate to this, but when i write fics with sex i find it soooo hard to really get the reader to feel the true amount of passion in each character. You do a wonderful job, and im glad you 'work-it' but not over do it. You leave enough room to really think instead of creating a wham-bam kinda feel to the entire romance. I love it!-LOVE IT!
I'm hooked!
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing! Even thi=ough I was ready to go to bed, I stayed up because I know that if I had gone to sleep without reading the lastest chapter I would've been unable to sleep and thought about it all night. Only to eventually get back and read. I loved getting surprised when reading or have a character react in away you didn't evpect or anticipate, and your are amoung the royalty at doing in this. AND we also got to see a complete full on sex scene, YEAH!!
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful very hot