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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh....mmmm.. that was gooood... k. now that i've basked in the pleasure of plot i want to mention how i appreciate the fact that u don't forget a character is not one dimensional. i hate it when an author only writes one side of a character and takes away from them as a whole. (also why i hate bashing) neways i say this cause u've finally given up that last and final reason for harry's fear.
i am now anxiously anticipating swanfair's demise and that lovely sense of irony i'm sure ur goin to use when she realizes she's just been slammed. XD also can't wait for the smut afterwards. sigh... mayhap there will be a sequel when this is finished. (kitty cat eyes.) viva la vida!
i am now anxiously anticipating swanfair's demise and that lovely sense of irony i'm sure ur goin to use when she realizes she's just been slammed. XD also can't wait for the smut afterwards. sigh... mayhap there will be a sequel when this is finished. (kitty cat eyes.) viva la vida!
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Only two chapters left... I'm secretly crying at night. ^^
Now I'm longing to know how their plan regarding Colben will turn out. And I hope Swanfair will suffer. She deserves it.
I also hope Severus will be the first to take Harry while Draco simply holds him and takes care of him, allowing Harry to simply feel without any need to worry about Draco's pleasure for once... I'm curious what you've planned for that scene.
Why do you so often put scenes with penetration at the end of your stories, by the way? It was that way with "Eyes That Can See In Ihe Dark" and "Long-Desired" and I think with many other stories, too. Your relationships build slowly most of the time. I'd like to read something from you where the sex is at the beginning. I'm not sure, maybe you've written that kind of story somewhere, but I can't remember one, to be honest. Except for a few of your one-shots ("Leader of Men" is one of them, which I found pretty good, just so that you know :-)), your characters act so deliberately with their sexual encounters. There's so much thinking about giving in and dominance and being able to trust... Your're doing that pretty good, but sometimes I'd like to read less about people's thoughts and more about what's acutally happening, and even more about the coricumstances, more description of places and people. You use a quite personal third person POV for writing. Do you experiment with other styles, such as first person, or simply more distanced from your characters? I'm sorry I don't know the terms that are used to explain this in English. But I think you know what I mean?
Now I'm longing to know how their plan regarding Colben will turn out. And I hope Swanfair will suffer. She deserves it.
I also hope Severus will be the first to take Harry while Draco simply holds him and takes care of him, allowing Harry to simply feel without any need to worry about Draco's pleasure for once... I'm curious what you've planned for that scene.
Why do you so often put scenes with penetration at the end of your stories, by the way? It was that way with "Eyes That Can See In Ihe Dark" and "Long-Desired" and I think with many other stories, too. Your relationships build slowly most of the time. I'd like to read something from you where the sex is at the beginning. I'm not sure, maybe you've written that kind of story somewhere, but I can't remember one, to be honest. Except for a few of your one-shots ("Leader of Men" is one of them, which I found pretty good, just so that you know :-)), your characters act so deliberately with their sexual encounters. There's so much thinking about giving in and dominance and being able to trust... Your're doing that pretty good, but sometimes I'd like to read less about people's thoughts and more about what's acutally happening, and even more about the coricumstances, more description of places and people. You use a quite personal third person POV for writing. Do you experiment with other styles, such as first person, or simply more distanced from your characters? I'm sorry I don't know the terms that are used to explain this in English. But I think you know what I mean?
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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Please update soon!
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just get overprotective. I did find it amusing until my brain worked overtime, I promise!
And then Harry went and copped it from someone else. What a cow Swanfair is.
Wonderfully written, as ever.
And then Harry went and copped it from someone else. What a cow Swanfair is.
Wonderfully written, as ever.
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CLIFF HANGER?! I'm super excited that Harry's well again. And Draco's plan sounds great, can't wait to see it.
Speaking of Draco, his performance with the pure bloods was amazing. I loved how the purebloods moved away from the one guy who insisted on screwing himself
Speaking of Draco, his performance with the pure bloods was amazing. I loved how the purebloods moved away from the one guy who insisted on screwing himself
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Harry! What a nasty thing to have suffered. I rather like Draco's idea, however. Vengeance is sweet and pleasantly fulfilling. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Well done. As an aside, I thought Severus was incredible.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your characters. Thay have become a set of my most favorite versions. You are ingenius in the unfolding of their strengths and depths and relationships. You have made this so much more than the smutty little voyeuristic bit of shallowness that I am ashamed to say is what I initially expected from this story. You are luminescent, love. Absolutely on fire with it. Thank you.
~Mia
~Mia
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I find it quite funny that the two charms collided and now Severus has to clean it all up. I also find the waiter's reaction was priceless. I think anyone would have acted the same way.
I hope to read more in the near future.
I hope to read more in the near future.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Poor Snape. All that hard work for nothing. This is getting REALLY good, and I would have reviewed earlier, but never had anything to say. I just thought it was about time you heard just how much I'm enjoying this, so I'm letting you know that this is the FIRST story I check when I'm looking for updates, and it's always great to see a new chapter! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, and keep up the good work!!!