rate_review Reviews

I like your story. Very good pacing

Part 3

I was listening to Kelly Clarkson's "My Life Would Suck Without You" while reading this (utterly by accident. XD It just happened to come on as I was reading) and couldn't help but notice how amazingly it fit with what's been happening so far. I'm unutterably glad I managed to come back to fandoms in time to find you're writing such amazing things as this, and Viper. At first I wasn't entirely certain about the Snape aspect of it, but you've managed to portray him in such a way that it just couldn't work without him.

This chapter went by so quickly. I kept thinking, "oh no, it's almost done. read slower!" This story is going to be brilliant, I can tell ;0) I want more. I'll be patient though....for like, a day.

I've always been envious of your ability to make even the most unconventional of characters seem so reasonable. Case in point: the story where Harry acted as Draco's boyfriend, Brian. Harry was so emotionally scarred in that story that I wondered if you worked in a psychiatric institution, for surely such ideas can't just pop into someone's mind on their own. This story, even though the characters are much more conventional in their thought processes, still has that element of "weird" contributed by the plot.

The plot by itself is in no shape or form a complete novelty. However, you expanded on the plot, but kept such a tight reign as you did it so that there's something undeniably "you" about the story. Most authors tend to use a similar motif to tie all their works together so that when you read a piece of unclaimed prose, it is still possible to speculate on whose work it is. I feel that even though you use such a motif (homosexual relationship), if you wrote a story outside of your normal parameters, I would still recognize your work. This, coming from me (who is quite literary illiterate) is quite a feat.

I would tell you how I distinguish your work from others, but I'm afraid you will think me quite touched in the head.

So instead, I would like to commend you on another wonderfully written chapter. You even made me understand Ginny's point of view, and I have quite an irrational and intense hatred for her character.

beautiful beginning, sucks you right in. I love how IC are all three. Harry/Draco/Snape, with Harry as the Dom has got to be my favorite slash threesome : )

oh dear. Poor Ginny. Yes? I think so. Go, Harry! Save Snape. And draco. in a sexy kinky fanfiction way! Go Harry go! : )

Hi! Loved it the cliffie might kill me tho. It's nice to see the effects of both sides of the bonds.

I've been reading your other two stories and I've been loving them. When I saw this story while doing sweeps I knew I had to read it. I can't wait for another chapter. I look forward to Harry's continual struggle against the bond and Snape's and Draco's persuasion.

Harry is so hard-headed...but then he didn't see what Snape and Draco saw with the aid of that potion. Perhaps with Snape's Pensieve memory and Hermione's corroboration on the magical theory, Harry will start to come around.
Ginny is SO not gonna be happy when she finds out, heh.
Great chapter! Keep going!

Part 2

I have long been away from the internet in general, and fanfiction in particular, working on original novels of my own, and doing a lot of reading, but a sudden and undeniable need to read HP suddenly claimed me, and I rushed back and found this, and read it. I'll definitely be sticking around for more of this one, and I'll catch up to Providence and Inter Vivos (I believe that's the name of it, I'm too tired to go look it up now) at a later date.