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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Part 5
ONOES. I certainly HOPE you can keep up this pace of updating (without killing yourself in the process) This fanfic is the center of my fan-life right now, with Viper on the outskirts, especially now that things are starting to look up in both fics. And even if it's just a little bump before things plummet back down to horrible (from their point of view) I'm still enthralled by these two. Particularly this one. Watching the interplay of power and who's figuring who out first and how they're all starting to work together - it just makes me squee.
... The captcha for this is comrade loo. XDDDDD
ONOES. I certainly HOPE you can keep up this pace of updating (without killing yourself in the process) This fanfic is the center of my fan-life right now, with Viper on the outskirts, especially now that things are starting to look up in both fics. And even if it's just a little bump before things plummet back down to horrible (from their point of view) I'm still enthralled by these two. Particularly this one. Watching the interplay of power and who's figuring who out first and how they're all starting to work together - it just makes me squee.
... The captcha for this is comrade loo. XDDDDD
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very promising story! I'm really enjoying it. I can't decide if I like or dislike how utterly selfish Severus is being--on the one hand, you've establish his absolute need for survival at all costs, but I feel like he's using Draco (who seems more vulnerable in this fic than many others), though that will change as the story grows, I suspect.
Not a criticism, merely an observation! I do like the story and your style is nearly perfect. Hopefully Harry will come around soon enough, and all three men will get what they really want (but don't know it).
Not a criticism, merely an observation! I do like the story and your style is nearly perfect. Hopefully Harry will come around soon enough, and all three men will get what they really want (but don't know it).
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so much more than what I expected between Draco and Severus, and I think it was great that cute moment you added when Severus returns to the room after talking with Harry, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Think this was a great chapter, and you kind of answered the question of why I think Harry is being selfish, I mean, he isn
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Part 4
The captcha for this is 'of rabies'. I'm not sure if that should be funny in some way, because it seems like it should be, but I'm too tired to connect it to anything at the moment.
Anyway, I think I saw you mention somewhere that updates for this are going to be sporadic, and it's already making me feel wild. It was Mongoose and Viper that drew me back to your stories, but this is keeping me going. Every time I check my email, I'm hoping to see this has been updated.
The scene between Snape and Draco was masterfully accomplished, and I absolutely cannot wait for Ginny to disappear (as a character, she's probably my least favourite, second only to Dumbledore.) even if Harry doesn't start getting closer to the other two because of it.
The captcha for this is 'of rabies'. I'm not sure if that should be funny in some way, because it seems like it should be, but I'm too tired to connect it to anything at the moment.
Anyway, I think I saw you mention somewhere that updates for this are going to be sporadic, and it's already making me feel wild. It was Mongoose and Viper that drew me back to your stories, but this is keeping me going. Every time I check my email, I'm hoping to see this has been updated.
The scene between Snape and Draco was masterfully accomplished, and I absolutely cannot wait for Ginny to disappear (as a character, she's probably my least favourite, second only to Dumbledore.) even if Harry doesn't start getting closer to the other two because of it.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm beginning to feel like Draco and Snape are bastards. And that is not a criticism, I really enjoy this story. You've done a fantastic job of portraying the feelings and thoughts of the three characters. I'm not seeing how they're going to get together. I eagerly await a new update.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic! Poor Harry doesn't even have a clue... lol. Can't wait to read more!
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Unfortunately, I can barely read a story where Harry is the bottom, now it looks like he'll be the bottom for both. I love all your other stories and am looking forward to reading them. I'm absolutely amazed at the amount of work you have written since I've first read your story, I've enjoyed it all.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yea! I really like that chapter. Seeing what the bond felt like for Severus and Draco was nice and rather hot as well : ). I am inagining a less then happy Ginny in the future.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Severus's approach and glad Harry is bending since he was being very selfish in risking their health... it'll be fun to see how far Severus and Draco get w/Harry; can't wait for more!