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OMG! I absolutely love this story!

Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^

Jan

Everything that is gorgeous and searing, strong and delicately beautiful, stubborn and hopeful and everything at once. I feel the desperate need for more like SS and DM in this story. How is it that this entrancement you have written managed to fold us into a bond to your story just as fast? Thank you. It is more beautiful than I could have imagined. (And I prided myself on my outrageous imagination.) You are a gem among peddlers of plastic.

~Mia

I can't really say anything except I can't wait for the next installment.

Yay! Big development!!! I hope Harry realizes how much Draco and Severus actually care about him. I loved this chapter! Thanks for the update!!!

wow, this story is compelling! I like the delicate intricacy with which you're exploring all their emotions, and the way the relationship between them - and with others - is clearly evolving constantly, as it naturally would. I like your Draco. I'm admiring your Harry very much. And I'm hoping that some day soon, some appreciation will be given by both of them to Severus, who is not just the greatest hero of them all but who has endured so much, which has made him so wary of accepting his own emotions.

I'm also hoping that this will be updated again soon, and often! Not to whine, LOL. I don't usually start WIPs because they so often never get finished (or worse, never end, hee). But this was so strongly recommended ... and is every bit as good as reported. In fact, better! I applaud your gentle but honest resolution with Ginny; I think it was a very realistic first affair for both Harry & Ginny, and very IC for her. I love that Ron and Hermione are involved, can't wait to see who else is! Your characters are all very well delineated. (Although I'm sorry that Kingsley is being a bad cross between a tyrant and a bureaucrat! I usually think of him as a bit smarter than that. But anyone who dislikes Snape - well, no sympathy from me!)

I've been enjoying all the details very much - Harry's training, the spell details, the History potion (3 yowls of approval!), and their new house. Severus's new potions lab, especially, with its multi-material shelving and careful storage and transfiguring Table, is pure win. Also, I can't wait to find out who and what Brynhildr Swanfair is... But at the same time, I hope they won't continue to have to be on permanent danger alert!

Total bliss, this story! Many thanks for writing it and sharing with us! I look forward to much more.

Harry has been manipulated his entire life, it is not surprising that he would ignore his own pain to get the job done, no matter what it might be. He has, after all, been given the subconscious message that he is less imortant than the task at hand.

ooh, I like this story and the new developments. Can't wait for the next installment!

Just read the first 11 chapters this evening, with much pleasure. I really appreciate how you're taking it slow, exploring the characters and the threats they face. Snape's outstanding - I like how he has doubts and gets things wrong sometimes. Thanks for not bashing Ginny, too. Will keep an eye on this fic for future reading.

I'm so glad that Harry told Huxley where to shove it. He suffered and sacrificed way more than anyone else and people still expect so much of him. Go Harry!
Swanfair showed up in person! Whoa. Next chapter will be interesting!
Great chapter. Keep going!

Hmmm... I can't wait to fid out more about this woman. And I loved Harry's belated Christmas presents! Another awesome chapter, not that i thought for a second it could be anything less than amazing! Your stories ALWAYS are:) Thank you for the update, and I look forward to the next.