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OK now we are getting somewhere.I like the way you wrote Draco in this chapter going for mad to quit and how he beganing to see life with Snape will be ok if Harry stay away .We know that not going to happen.I love it when Harry at the door and they just look at each other.Keep up the good work .3 cheer for you now that Ginny gone.

AHHHHHHHHH!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! When will Harry finally SEE???I love the way he's starting to come around to the idea, now that Ginny's outta the picture! Xp I can't WAIT until he finally realizes what he's got sitting right in front of him and finally releases it all!

This is a great story, can't wait for the next update!

im off on holiday this week and will have to wait a whole ten days for more, im not sure if i can handle it.

That was incredibly erotic and very appealing. I loved the cautiousness of this chapter and the way you portray Harry as trying to manage everyone in his life. But especially how much care he takes for those he cares about. Kingsley's blindness to Harry and to Severus I think, is going to cost him in more than just ulcers and public opinion. Thank you, once again.

~Mia

I had a long review for the last chapter written, but it got lost and I didn't want to write it all again, sorry :-)
This chapter impressed me most by giving Draco some space to show his emotions. Showing him as vulnerable and full of passion. Those things make this story really special: the way they all have their moments, their weaknesseschange, times when they need reassurance and care. Last chapter Harry was the one who was so herat-wrenching lost and vulnerable, this time it was Draco, but slowly, slowly, all of them begin to get along and get to know each other. They can even handle minor conflicts. Give then time, just as you've done so far. I would really like it if you kept skipping through months and weeks as you did at the beginning of the story. Time is what the bond needs most, I guess.
Have you considered what Harry will do when completely healed? I mean as it seems unlikely he will return to his auror apprenticeship... I really like stories where he gets into wandmaking. But maybe this isn't the right one. Could I inspire your to write one? :-))

Thank you for the update! I am still loving this story. Great chapter.

I like the character developement you are creating. Potter has got to learn to control his world, it's been controlling him for too long. He already has a basic staff of advisors, now he has to learn to work the media, and Hermione and Draco have enough moxie to do that for him. I see Sev as becoming very much the power behind the throne, a role he would be excellent in and is eminently qualifed for. Very nice work!

The pieces are coming together...

Anxious to have more....
-Moonlit Sanctity-

Enjoying this very much. As I have enjoyed all your work. Look forward to seeing the bond progress.

I think I have been a bad reader, because I don't think I have reviewed this yet, and I have been reading from the start... BAD me! I blame my eyes... I really can't read on screen for very long, so I usually print longer stories, and that often leads to me forgetting ro review... *sigh* well... BAD reader, I told you! Aaaanyway, here goes... I think this is one of the best HP fanfics out there right now! When I first saw it I though "oh, another 'forced bond' story" but I started reading, because they are kinda my guilty pleasure (and three-somes are another, but please don't tell anyone... ;o) ) but this didn't turn ouyt to be a "oh, damn, we bonded, let's have sex" smut-fest (not that I don't like those, but...;o) ), it's actually a REAL story, with an intelligent plot and interesting developments that feels REAL to read, and I love it! You even let Harry have an "normal" (forgive me for that word, I'm Swedish, and I couldn't find the right one) relationship with Ginny first... THe ONLY objection I have has nothing to do with the story at all, it has to do with the formatting... I'm having trouble with the doubble spacing-thing... I actually have to paste the text into my HTML-editor and remove the spacing before printing, because with them it's hard to read (and wastes paper, but that's more my problem)... I've tried reading a bit on the screen, but with the big spaces I kinda find it difficult for the text to "flow", if you know what I mean... I don't know if anyone else has problems with it, though, and you have to forgive me if you have adressed this in review-replys or something, I generally never copy them (I'm just greedy and after the story... ;o))
Aaaannnyway, please continue this wonderful story, I'm looking forward to every update!