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I liked this chapter... I liked that Severus got to Swanfair? and that they have a new allies... Draco's progress and comment about Severus not sharing are interesting... Harry's jealousy is almost cute b/c it's so unnecessary since he could join them and I hope he realizes it soon; thanks for the update!

I really enjoyed this part. very much looking forward to the next.

Shared thoughts and blended dreams? Sounds exciting! ;)
Of course Swanfair would do something like that but I'm glad that Harry fought it off without the help of Draco or Severus. It shows that he's powerful in his own right.
Great chapter! Keep going!

Wow! I loved all the decriptive colors in this chapter. And I kinda like Swanfair in this chapter. She's fiesty. I'll probably regret saying that later, but oh well. I am so glad that Draco and Severus can connect like that now. The bond isn't all leaning on Harry now. I am glad you updated! I wish I had as much commitment to my stories as you did. Maybe then I would actually finish one. Thanks for the update.

P.S- I was wondering if your could do some advertising for a fic that I am reading. I am enjoying it alot and I think you know the author, or she knows you or something.

The Price of Valour by WeasleyWench. Medic Draco/Patient Harry.

I just like it alot ad wanna get it out there. Don't feel obligated :P

Really good, still addicted but a little annoyed. How can you not want to speed up the relationship between Severus, Draco and Harry?!?!? Its killing me!! Well not really but a little. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Nice one, just go on that way.
But I think they should also have a little more fun along the way. They're in a quite serious conflict with parts of the wizarding world, I know, dealing with their complicated feelings and still with the aftermaths of war and so on... it's not a good time to simply relax, everyone is very tense right now. But still, let them play a little more. An orgy of firewhisky? Maybe just Draco and Harry having some fun doing something innocent like cleaning the kitchen? Something that turns out the comical way. Nothing completely ridiculous or undignified. But there is nothing that can push relationships in the right direction as good as a little shared laughter. I imagine both boys dueling for fun and/or getting drunk with the Weasley twins and Severus horrified and really pissed off by it. By the way, how does is affect the bond when Harry is drunk? I would really really like a description of Harry's feelings while beeing drugged.

I wonder how you can keep on your awesome writing schedule. How many words do you a day in average?

Good chapter. Thanks for the update!

Indeed it does. It is one of the reasons I so like the Slytherin party. They know how to do revenge. And do it well; with style. Another gem of a chapter. Thank you, once more.

~Mia

I didn't mean it in a controlling sense, more in the sense of a consort giving their support and advice. I hope you weren't offended by the comment, it was merely what I could see Sev's role evolving into as his wealth of experience was put to use. Draco, on the other hand, would make a great front man for the new face of pureblood equality.

Great chapter!
That was a good move on Harry's part to give the speech by himself so that he's not seen as dependent on others.
I liked how Severus handled Draco's confession. Severus knew exactly what to say and what to do afterward.
I like this slow build-up towards the eventually triad. Severus is "interesting" indeed. ;)
It's interesting that, at a max, one of the bondmates is on good comfortable terms with Harry at a particular time (generally speaking), not both at the same time. First Harry wanted both at a distance. Then Harry was okay with Draco but distant with Severus due to Severus' inability to open up. Now Draco's in the toilet because of past bad feelings... it's a rollercoaster with these three! But that's what makes this story so engaging!
Keep going!