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for Their Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHH! You can't leave it like that! Who would be ballsy enough to attack Harry right outside the Burrow? Who would know that he would be there at that specific time anyway?
Great chapter! Keep going!
person Tiffani
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far and I'm just dying for Harry to realize that Draco and Severus would accept him lol
I'd appreciate it if you would add me to your mailing list so I can read more of this story when you update ^_^
Great story
person Dani
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredible!!!! I liked the traps that they set! Good thinking! I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens! Do you know about how long you're going to make this story?Excellent chapter!
person dana_aeryn
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't think that I've mentioned how much I'm loving this story, but I do. This last chapter is a gem . The whole scene with the Aurors and Harry's maybe? suitor was wonderful. Look forward to your update. Sorry i don't comment as much on lj- always too far behind on my flist.
person amy l
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!!!. harry is sooo stupid. i would have been in their bed in a heart beat. lol. love this story. cant wait for the next chapter. hope u had a great 4th of july.
person PanickedSerenity
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter! I loved all the traps! It was great. Thanks for updating.
person Sasha
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He was committed to survival, no matter how the world changed, no matter what he had to do to gain it. He never seemed to consider that there might be higher goals than mere survival, the maintaining of one
person Sasha
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He was committed to survival, no matter how the world changed, no matter what he had to do to gain it. He never seemed to consider that there might be higher goals than mere survival, the maintaining of one
person qwerty
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved all thr traps that Harry, Severus, and Draco set for the Aurors. It was hilarious!
Great chapter! Keep going!
person catnona
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've just spent the last three day reading this from the start....a wonderful story, great plot, interesting character development and interaction between them, so I really want to read more, due to the fact that from the very beginning I've been saying to my self 'gees Harry get a clue already!' I really want to read that chapter when it happens.