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Ahhh, thats a bit harsh of Draco. Harry doesn't get that he can have an equal role in the relationship without ruining it. At the same time I understand why he is angry. I am glad it wasn't Cadell. Thanks for the update. I am sorry if my guess offended you.

Eak! They're going to have to tie Harry to the bed aren't they? That's a pretty picture. There I go again with the stuff inside my head and not in your story yet. Anyway, good job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon!!!!!

Good but evil cliffhanger ^^( I like those, though, of course, I want to continue reading that very second I'm left with them). Cesarion seems to be a nice guy. But I can't stop thinking maybe he's the one behind this attack? Not that Harry's lacking of other enemies that could be responisble for it... Yeah, Harry's right, Severus and Draco are complicated persons and expect a lot of him. So it's nice for him to spend time with someone who is more easy-goimg then them. I think it's good he makes his own first experiences with hompsexuality with someone outside the bond. So he can see for himself what works best for him, and if he is really attracted to men.
I simply think so.
Waiting for the next part and thanks for writing! ^^

Chapter 16-

I really liked this chapter. I loved Draco's excitement over his expermiment, which was really neat! I also liked the development of the bond between Severus and Draco, but I am feeling so sorry for Harry. I have a feeling he's going to try to date someone else, and then much angst and misery will ensue.

I know everyone is getting anxious about when the threesome sex starts, but I think you are developing the story at a realistic pace. That isn't to say I'm not waiting with bated breath as well; just that you should take your time and write as you originally intended (which I'm sure you're doing--just offering my support!).

Lovely, as always. On to the next chapter!

Chapter 17-

Aha! I was right about Harry going outside the bond for lurve. But I don't want to be right. *pouts*

A lovely chapter! I was laughing throughout the Aurors' invasion and gasped aloud when that bitch slapped Harry. What a fool.

I think Caesarion wants Harry for him fame; hopefully he picks up on that--he seems to be pretty clever in this, if a little self-deluded. Oh, your OC's name reminds me of cesarean section. Ew. LOL

I liked Harry's confession to Severus about how he will never come between them. He is so deliciously naive and innocent. I hope Severus doesn't take his time disabusing Harry of his misapprehension. :)

Hello! I love you story so far. It is very deep and draws you in almost immediately. I can't wait for the three to finally get together, and the emotions described for Draco and Severus are making me dislike Cadell. I was wondering if you could add me to the update list you send e-mails to so I can come and read more when you update! I would really appreciate it! Happy writing, and keep up the great work! ^_^

Evil Cliffhanger!!! Harry's new boyfriend better not have betrayed him! Aww man, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for the update!

NOOOOOOO!!! NOT HARRY!!! that is beyond evil!!!!! no fair!!

Oh, cr*p, now someone's gone and done it. Ledbetter will be very angry when Severus kills and torures a few kidnappers. if this is a Ministry ploy, they're getting even dumber than usual. Harry will be ok, right?

What a place to leave us! Hope you get to update soon since I'm curious about who the attackers are^_^