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for Their Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I know how you write the different ways Severus and Draco are attacking the barrier between them and Harry.
Keep going!
person Snivelly
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Harry's denial is really driving me up a wall! Every time Draco and Severus do something that I'm sure will convince him to form a triad with them, he comes back with some reason why they won't work. And the most frustrating part of it is that all his reasons are valid! Or at least mostly valid. Sometimes I feel like Harry's being a bit of a hypocrite. But of course, that's just Harry. Always too stubborn. Hopefully Severus and Draco can get through to him soon! I'm craving the moment he opens the bond the other way.

The political plot is full steam ahead! I bet Kingsley is really biting those nails now, eh? What has he gotten himself into, the poor man. And Narcissa is absolutely brilliant! You've made her the perfect mix of intuition and superiority without allowing her ego to get too out of check. I wonder what that book is that she won't let Draco see.

I'll be here, on the edge of my seat, until the next chapter :)
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I loved this chapter. I can't wait to hear Harry's thoughts on Draco's "revelation." I'm sure it will be groundbreaking.

Severus talking with Draco about how they share something that Harry can't made me feel sad. Though I know triads aren't always equal, I hope they can include Harry fairly, despite the distance between them.

I loved the kiss! I think your readers all over the world heaved a sigh of, "Finally!" LOL Myself included, of course.

Excellent writing, as always, and I look forward to your update!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Finally!!!! I feel almost as happy as Draco right now =D Harry needed a good slap in the face of reality and he sure as hell got it lol. Very well done, very well done I say. As always I shall be awaiting the next update with great antcipation. For now, though, I shall bid you a very fond farewell and also my best wishes and thoughts of inspiration sent in your direction. Never forget that you will always have at least one very attentive reader ready to beg for more, just in case you need a reason to continue. As long as one person wants it, why deny them?? Again, Congrats and much love =)
person Snivelly
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've finally caught up with Their Phoenix and WOW! It's amazing the way you've created the three characters, Harry, Draco and Severus, and then twined their lives and personalities and problems together into one perfect web. It's very complex but easily comprehendable and of course, deeply addicting. I was talking to another of your readers about it the other day and I think we've come up with the easiest way to describe it:

"I am ADDICTED to Their Phoenix. Snape is so... *gushes* and Draco is so... *swoons* and Harry is so... *squeals*!!!"

Rofl!

I wish there was more I could say! Swanfair is an excellent character, as is Cadell. They're almost like foils for each other aren't they? I love that :D Your Ron and Hermione are refreshingly accurate (but then they always are :)). Hmm, what else, what else? My thoughts keep drawing back to the web you've weaved with Harry, Draco and Severus but I don't have the words to describe how jittery and happy it makes me every time one of those three interact with one or both of the others.

This is, without doubt, the best bond story I've read yet and I'll be impatiently staring at my inbox for the email from your yahoo group that will tell me you've updated!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhhh..........do i sense a threesome coming?? i saw the way Hermione was licking her lips, like she just knew what was gonna happen next!!!

HEHEHEHE.

laters!

miko ~_^
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"His emotions, rioting through the bond like drunken kangaroos because of Draco." HA! That was so funny. I read through that part once, got to the next sentence, and was like, "What!?" I have never seen a druken kangaroo, but I can only guss it would be life changing. Finally Harry gets it... I hope. Can't be much more obvious than that. Anyway, thanks for the new chapter and I can't wait for the next!
person allyroksmuch
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay the cat is out of the bag! The cat is out of teh bag! Now we have to wait and see what Harry does with this knowledge...Can't wait!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Drunken kangaroos"? *lol*, brilliant, once again.
This chapter was probabaly the most amazing one I've read in a long time. Emotionally intense. I really, really liked it. Draco, though a little selfish in his actions, told Harry exactly what neeeded to be told. Though I like this story in general and not only because of possible smut, I'm also waiting for the bondmates to get closer, and the relationship between them is the most important element for me. The dialogue between Draco and Severus when they were in bed together was pretty funny.
For a long time I thought Draco could be the one to unite Severus and Harry. Now the other aspect seems more important: Harry and Draco need Severus to compensate, since there is still a lot of rivalry between them.
Where do we go from here? I hope to read it soon.
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I was drawn into this story way more than I thought I would be. It is fantastic and I'm desparate to know what happens next!!!! Please update soon!!!! Congrats and much love =)