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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They're together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *happy dance* Hopefully they can work things out between them so that they're comfortable with one another.
I wonder if Cadell is going to be petty about this and start something...
Great chapter!
I wonder if Cadell is going to be petty about this and start something...
Great chapter!
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I hope everything goes well. I feel bad for Cadell though. Oh well, such is life. Thanks for the new chapter.
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Cadell, but hell, this is the best cahpter ever. Yay for Draco and Severus. Harry said within a month! Here's hoping all goes well until then. Wonder if we'll be seeing more of Kinsley soon. He can't be pleased about the new candidate.
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah Harry. I did enjoy Colben. She seems like she will be a very interesting character!! Poor Draco and Severus though...Harry is just so daft sometimes. I loved how Narcissa was spot on about Harry, and shes not even his bondmate! Excellent chapter can't wait for more! And I anticipate when Harry will finally be with Snape and Draco!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. I wish that there were more updates so that I could find out what happened because its very addictive.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay Draco finally got to kiss Harry and I'm happy that he told Harry the simple truth lol
I'm excited about more of this story ^_^
I'm excited about more of this story ^_^
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I look forward to the next!
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can see where Draco and Severus are both coming from, but they've spent many years perfecting tormenting Harry and making him feel "less than" in numerous ways that they themselves feel superior; whereas Severus and Draco have always been at least fond of each other. It really isn't fair to expect Harry to instantly adjust his vision to see them the way they want him to. The least they can do is attempt to communicate with him in the manner he feels most comfortable (like Draco finally did when he came right out and stated what they wanted from him, even if he did equate it to leading Harry by the hand like a child). Their mental comparisons to Harry of being simple sound as though they still have an underlying opinion of him being "less than" or not quite good enough and I think Harry feels this, just as he did when he lived with the Dursleys. Harry just wants to be loved and accepted for himself, not because of who he is, what he's done - to be good enough NOW, not after he's been molded into what his bondmates want him to be. They've also done a good job of making him feel like they can get along just fine without Harry, personally, and who doesn't wish to feel needed, not just wanted? As far as Draco and Severus go, Draco really needs to start building up Severus in the manner that Severus does Draco - realizing that he's not the only one who could use some confidence and a few compliments. In other words, a little give along with the take would be great. That could be what Harry means, in part, with the selfish issue he has with Draco. I find it interesting that Narcissa can see the situation fairly clearly. She seems to have a firm handle on what Harry's like and how he looks at his relationships. Definitely looking forward to more chapters.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to come out of my shadow hiding and admit that this story has me constantly dashing over to my computer every Tuesday and Friday to see if the next chapter has been posted yet.
Never before have I found a Harry Potter fanfiction threesome done so seamlessly while also keeping me hanging on for 20+ chapters. I truly enjoy your writing style and this story has certainly become one of my most favorites.
Also, chapter 20 was a great surprise to me, with Draco's jealousy finally boiling over enough to confront Harry. The confrontation was executed splendidly, allowing Draco to get his point across while at the same time neither alienating Harry or pushing him away for any incredibly long length of time. And of course, Draco got a kiss out of the ordeal as well.
Never before have I found a Harry Potter fanfiction threesome done so seamlessly while also keeping me hanging on for 20+ chapters. I truly enjoy your writing style and this story has certainly become one of my most favorites.
Also, chapter 20 was a great surprise to me, with Draco's jealousy finally boiling over enough to confront Harry. The confrontation was executed splendidly, allowing Draco to get his point across while at the same time neither alienating Harry or pushing him away for any incredibly long length of time. And of course, Draco got a kiss out of the ordeal as well.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter! I like how both Draco and Severus are making efforts to change. I hope that Harry soon realizes that he is not exactly perfect himself, and expecting his bondmates to change without offering any sort of change in return is unrealistic. He needs to give them a chance and stop judging them by past actions; that is, after all, what he's been telling everyone ELSE for the year they've been bonded. Sheesh.
I can't wait for more! Oh, and I thought the new figurehead (can't remember her name now! So horrible with names) was a very interesting and unique character.
I can't wait for more! Oh, and I thought the new figurehead (can't remember her name now! So horrible with names) was a very interesting and unique character.