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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly can not think of a single thing that has even the minute potential to put me off your story. It is all kinds of realistic (for the realm it is in, afterall) and feels so genuine. You have a depth and an insight into relationships in your writing that feels like no one could ever have thought of this before you. It is what draws me back eagerly into your story every time. You, love, know how to tell quite a story. How is it that you manage to write about magic and bonds anf phoenixes and the like, yet you leave me feeling as though you never wrote a single word that was anything but the most absolute truth. Thank you.
~Mia
~Mia
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah!
Brilliant chapter! I've been stalking this story and a few others waiting for updates all day and when I saw this one with a new chapter I was ecstatic.
I love how you portray Sev, especially with him wanting the same human comforts that anyone would want. Marvelous job so far, can't wait for the next chapter <3
Brilliant chapter! I've been stalking this story and a few others waiting for updates all day and when I saw this one with a new chapter I was ecstatic.
I love how you portray Sev, especially with him wanting the same human comforts that anyone would want. Marvelous job so far, can't wait for the next chapter <3
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!! Finally the stubborn bastard hasseen the light!!!! I'm so freakin happy I could go outsde and dance a jig in the street. Please tell me there will be more. Yes I want the smut and all that his decision implies, but I also want to see what happens with the ministy and all of that stuff going n outside of them. Keep it up, awesome job, lots of love and all that jazz. And once more Congrats on another successful chapter. I have to admit its hard waiting for the new chapters. The equivalent of waiting for a new book to come out in a series or something like that. Christmas and birthdays pale in comparison to the feeling of wanting a new book lol. So that should give u some idea of how much I like ur story. =)
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate the end of chapters when there's not one rite after...lol... this is such a great story. I just love what u have done with the people. Thank u.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was reading this fic on FF.net but now that its getting good...lol. Please please please update again soon, its amazing. HP/SS/DM is like one of my fave pairings. Thanks so much for the hot new chapter.
The whole process of having sex is so often rushed in fics but the buildup you've made had me getting excited over a first kiss. Keep up the amazing work.
The whole process of having sex is so often rushed in fics but the buildup you've made had me getting excited over a first kiss. Keep up the amazing work.
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a fantastically graceful way of incorporating a slow, searing burn of flame into your story. I can't get enough of your words now. They are mind crack. They leave me dizzy and breathless with awe and indescribable jittery, fluttery things. You leave me brokenly wordless and with the desire to be profoundly articulate all at once. How am I supposed to survive this kind of writing?
~Mia
~Mia
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Finally! Well, almost finally. I'm waiting on "the scene" as you well know. Are you actually going to write the smut or just gloss over it? My mouth is watering in eager anticipation of the next chapter! (PS. If I accidently reviewed the same chapter twice and said practically the same thing, it's because I had a small fight with someone, maybe aff maybe my internet provider, not entirely certain, I just know a fight went down, and my review lost)
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! OMFG! OMFG!!! It happened!!! It's here! Oh, I LOVED the little show Draco instigated with the fiery phoenix, or Harry's break-up (bye, loser.) and then there's Harry's realization (FINALLY!!!) that he wants to be with Draco and Severus!! YAY!!! Now time for the GOOD stuff!!! Can't wait for the next chappie, keep up the great work!
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!
I'm doing my happy dance right now
I feel a little bad for the guy Harry had been dating, but he was really just being used so he didn't need to stay with Harry.
That was awesome when Harry finally did get back and say he wanted to be with Draco and Severus.
Oh I loved this chapter. I'm very excited about the next one
I'm doing my happy dance right now
I feel a little bad for the guy Harry had been dating, but he was really just being used so he didn't need to stay with Harry.
That was awesome when Harry finally did get back and say he wanted to be with Draco and Severus.
Oh I loved this chapter. I'm very excited about the next one
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOO! 22 chapters later and they've all finally realized what they want! I think all your readers (myself included) are as happy as Draco and Severus in this moment xD You are the queen of suspense. Now I'll be twitching in anticipation for the rest. I've waited this long so less than a month (as time goes in the story) will be nothing :D That is...if all goes right. I might cry if anything else happens to seperate the three D:
Hmm, I do worry about Cadell. Angry ex's are always something to watch out for. As are those people who don't side with Harry's political views and/or are still untrusting of his bond/bond mates. Kingsley and his lot seem mostly tamed but one never knows.... GAH too many variables! They should just run away to a private island so they can't be inturrupted on their path to forming a triad xD
Like always, I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :)
Hmm, I do worry about Cadell. Angry ex's are always something to watch out for. As are those people who don't side with Harry's political views and/or are still untrusting of his bond/bond mates. Kingsley and his lot seem mostly tamed but one never knows.... GAH too many variables! They should just run away to a private island so they can't be inturrupted on their path to forming a triad xD
Like always, I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :)