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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh most definitely getting the love he deserves there! Beautifully written chapter.
I'm so pleased Harry decided to make it a first for all of them. Excluding one for 'the first time' would have hurt feelings.
I'm so pleased Harry decided to make it a first for all of them. Excluding one for 'the first time' would have hurt feelings.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Every time I see 'Their Phoenix' in the lastest area I squeal like a little child and rush to read it imediatly. And I am never disappointed, this was AMAZING!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gasps for oxygen*
Just when I thought that a threesome couldn't be hotter, the bonds added an extra sex kink that blew my mind over the edge and into the lusty abyss.
Happy Birthday Draco!
*can't want for the next chapter*
Just when I thought that a threesome couldn't be hotter, the bonds added an extra sex kink that blew my mind over the edge and into the lusty abyss.
Happy Birthday Draco!
*can't want for the next chapter*
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"In the end, he had to lean back in his chair and spend some time becoming reacquainted with his body and his mind in the wake of Harry
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! That was very hot! I'm so glad that all 3 came together (no pun intended).
Great chapter! Keep going!
Great chapter! Keep going!
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guh...and also? whimper. That;s all you get. Because the rest of me short circuited. Beautidul and sexy and mmmm. Thank you.
~Mia
~Mia
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice chapter
I think everyone enjoyed Harry's idea for a present. ^_^
I think everyone enjoyed Harry's idea for a present. ^_^
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't think i can truly express how frustrating it was too wait for today. that's how good this story is. just wondering... when voldie died did harry lose his parseltongue gift... or does he still have it? cause if he does i'm sure two slytherins would appreciate it. if not well there loss. can't wait til friday. viva la vida!
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was a lot of hot! I loved when Severus and Draco tackled Harry. And I especially loved the bit about Harry expecting not to recieve anything from the whole interaction. He can be so dim at times xD Of course Severus and Draco would want to reciprocate! But it was still nice that he fully intended for it to be all about them.
The bit with Hermione at the beginning was really nice :) I love a Hermione that's been put in her place as much as an embarrassed Hermione confronting personal relationship-based topics and that scene had both! Gosh, I just love Hermione so much! (But mostly as a really well written supporting character--which is exactly what you have in this story.)
I can't wait for more! Both of Kingsley and the impending doom I'm sure the triad is facing, and the continuation of their sexual explorations :D
The bit with Hermione at the beginning was really nice :) I love a Hermione that's been put in her place as much as an embarrassed Hermione confronting personal relationship-based topics and that scene had both! Gosh, I just love Hermione so much! (But mostly as a really well written supporting character--which is exactly what you have in this story.)
I can't wait for more! Both of Kingsley and the impending doom I'm sure the triad is facing, and the continuation of their sexual explorations :D
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hardly know what to write in this! I've spent the last few days reading through this story.
Suitably blown away is the only way to describe it, I think.
You have an amazing flair and talent for writing, especially in something like this with such a strong political current.
My favourite scene, I think, looking back, is as Harry shows Severus the memory and they are together. Just beautiful. I love the way Harry and Draco are represented here but Severus really takes the biscuit. He's just so... I sensed his inability to accept compliments and believe praise might be an issue as I started to read, and think you deal with it beautifully, the subtle nuances, like Harry advising Draco to pay him a compliment once in a while.
Really, really amazing -and I can't wait for the next chapter now. You just get the sense when they finally do share a bed, there won't be words for it -I don't envy you the task, but am sure it will be brilliant.
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Suitably blown away is the only way to describe it, I think.
You have an amazing flair and talent for writing, especially in something like this with such a strong political current.
My favourite scene, I think, looking back, is as Harry shows Severus the memory and they are together. Just beautiful. I love the way Harry and Draco are represented here but Severus really takes the biscuit. He's just so... I sensed his inability to accept compliments and believe praise might be an issue as I started to read, and think you deal with it beautifully, the subtle nuances, like Harry advising Draco to pay him a compliment once in a while.
Really, really amazing -and I can't wait for the next chapter now. You just get the sense when they finally do share a bed, there won't be words for it -I don't envy you the task, but am sure it will be brilliant.
xx