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eyes...burning, been up all night-reading... couldn't stop. Gah! Now my eyes are bllodshot and im out off coffee. Yet-, im am so glad that ive found this story- talk about a great read at 2am.
I want to know what clever swanfair is up to, she's too quiet, and that can only mean she's up to something. I beg of you, please do not kill off HP, DM, or SS; being the triad and all. Deathfic's are over done and this amazingly well done romance should have a big bang at the end that leaves us happy, not tearful. Justice!

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I did love Hermione in this one :) I especially loved her interaction with Ron. It really wasn't much but that's what makes it good. The way they are together is so easy and sweet that it's too common to really draw much attention.

Colben continues to surprise me as she does Severus and Draco. She seems honest enough and I think she'll make a good minister if she can get into office. I'm anxious to see where you'll take her and what conflict you might use her to stir up, if any. I love the plans she has for Hermione as well. I could really see those two interacting--I think it would be amusing!

I'm still coiled tight as a spring waiting for Kingsley or anyone else to cause problems. Severus is feeling entirely too happy with his lot in life, which I'm sure means trouble is on it's way xD Can't wait for the next update :)

Absolutely fantastic! I'm so happy that fights between them still happen but unlike before, they can resolve them quickly.
I love in this chapter how Severus had his own series of thoughts and the feeling of a filled life he has finally acquired. I can't wait to see more from this couple and of the wizarding world as this story progresses. (Almost forgot, Ron seems to be growing up a bit. His sour stomach was bound to happen when he found out about Harry's new relationship but I'm glad that he identified what had changed in his best mate's life and is happy for him.)

I found it hilarious that Ron automatically knew that Harry got laid.
Great chapter. I'm glad that we found out more about Colben.
Keep going!

Dear Lord, did they just avert an argument? *blinks* I'm surprised at them! But, obviously, there has to be some kind of honeymoon period, I trust that at some point they will fall out and argue? Plus, if two fall out and one is in the middle, that'd also be interesting. Not to mention the make-up sex. *whistle*

*grins* Another great chapter.

That was beautiful. Harry's admission he's in love with them.
They are still quite competitive in their bevhaviour - especially regarding sex. But the competition factor will probabaly be there for a long time - a decade at least, I guess - for there's too much dark history between them, and with Draco and Harry both being young men who are still searching for their own destination, not quite settled in their personalities.
I'd like to know what the bond will be like when the boys have become older - maybe fourty - and more mature: under which conditions do they live, how do they feel? For example, do they still sleep with each other, are there any children for one of them, hich kind of jobs do they have? I dont't think you intend to write a "20 years later"-epilogue once the story is finished, or do you? *begs with big puppy eyes*.
For now it's nice they share a bed. Good, too, Harry "came out" to Hermione and Ron. I'd like to read about a meeting at the burrows including his bondmates to see Molly's and other Weasleys' reactions to them being lovers.
I'm still curious - what kind of profession will Harry take on once Colben is minister and he and his bondmates are safe?

Oh so sweet
I love this so much

Bravo!! That was a GREAT chapter! I loved the way you brought them all together! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

Very hot new chapter, thanks for the update!