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for Linger

by desespoir

schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh no is it evil snape? i hope not, but your villian makes me think of him. Great story though. I can't wait to read more.
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow the whole not remembering Draco thing really shocked me i was like O_O -gasp-

good story hope you update soon

person kazfeist
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're hinting at Severus...but my money's on Lucius. Though it could be a Lestrange. Revenge for Bellatris, perhaps? That sounds about right. :D
person polka dot
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
somehow I think daddy malfoy may have a hand in this. He's always an easy villian to cast
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, this is getting very interesting! I know where the lines in the notes are from, but that doesn't help me too much at this point. I wonder who the mystery man is and I'm glad Pansy isn't totally evil here.
person Rosamund
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome update...love Pansy's predicament!
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I suppose Pansy is responsible in some way?
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story so far! *claps* i cant wait to read more =) keep up the great work
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think its pansy that did this i could be so wrong but its like u blame eveything on pansy first...lol
person kazfeist
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sounds more and more like it was Pansy or someone like her. :D