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by desespoir

person kazfeist
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update....and now I'm even more intrigued. Pansy's got a child, perhaps? Gotta be Blaise, then, or a Creevy. :D
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story and Hermione's words at the end were sweet. I still don't know who the villain is... Blaise maybe? And I'm over feeling sad for Pansy, she's totally ruining her supposed friend's life. Unless the person she's protecting is her child or something. But still!

Looking forward to their date soon. :)
person polka dot
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How can she not cook well? They have books on that. Oh well, it's gross that he made out with Pansy but at least I didn't have to read the nitty gritty.
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking amazing. I'm hooked, seriously. Glad you're all settled in, moving sucks, it's so time consuming. If I wasn't selfish, I would tell you to take all the time you needed. But...I am selfish and I really really hope you update soon.

What's kind of cool is that our stories are similar. Penance is mine, if you want to check it out.

Can't wait to see what's next!
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well you made me cry damn it....Hermione feels resentment towards Draco when it wasn't his fault. she LOVED him and I wish Draco would show her some of his memories of their time together. she loved him unconditionally and knew the risks and felt he was worth it. so that's why her anger, angers me.

that last part was just tugging at my heart.
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, great fic so far! Poor Draco!
If only Hermione remembered that last memory at least,
maybe Malfoy should show her some memories of them together in a pensieve.
I can't wait for more!!
xoxo
person kazfeist
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I thought the update was great. Poor Draco! I can't help feeling the person's related to him....a Lestrange, perhaps? But JKR never connected them with Shakespeare. Hmmmm. Zabini, perhaps? A contemporary who was always the quiet one? OR maybe....SNAPE? :D
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better ... Ok the mystery man .. Who could that be? My money is on Zabini but hey not completly sure or MMMMMMMMMMMM Did Lucius survive?????? There are so many enemies to chose from .... Ok keep them coming..
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Merlin that was painful. I think I hurt as much as Draco. Hermione's reaction was completely understandable, but I hope she gets past it soon. He can't take much more pain. Please update again sooner than later. Thanks!
person polka dot
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Draco can take his memories of her and put them in a pensieve so she can see them. If nothing else it's like cheap porn!