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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #8...
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has been my favorite chapter so far! I really enjoyed how you brought about Harry's slight submission to Draco, and his realization that the situation is now much more complicated. It reminded me of having a huge boulder in the way that's suddenly been struck by lightning, breaking off a substantial portion of it, but still leaving something left behind to try and remove. If that makes any sense?
In other words, one giant step for Harry and Draco perhaps sorting through the sticky situation.
In other words, one giant step for Harry and Draco perhaps sorting through the sticky situation.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since vampires are more or less immortal, do their Long Desired also become immortal? It seems to me that Lucy and The Collector have probably been together for a long time, yet Lucy is still a young girl.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yesssss another chapter! thank u thank u ^_^
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well damn! i really can't wait for the next chapter
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
Now that was interesting...the Birth of a Vampire Hunter. Hmmm, sounds like
a story that could be written. Oh wait...you ARE writing it! :-)
Okay..okay, I'll stop. :-]
You know, you come up with some interesting torture...uhh..Rooms. I'm curious
to see what you can do with a Glass Room.
Let's see what else....oh yeah!
About your crack fic, you're starting to get the hang of it, too bad that
DtCL ISN'T an actual story, I think at this point you can pull it off, if
you let yourself be confident enough to do it...and have someone beta it
to see if it flows.
Now that was interesting...the Birth of a Vampire Hunter. Hmmm, sounds like
a story that could be written. Oh wait...you ARE writing it! :-)
Okay..okay, I'll stop. :-]
You know, you come up with some interesting torture...uhh..Rooms. I'm curious
to see what you can do with a Glass Room.
Let's see what else....oh yeah!
About your crack fic, you're starting to get the hang of it, too bad that
DtCL ISN'T an actual story, I think at this point you can pull it off, if
you let yourself be confident enough to do it...and have someone beta it
to see if it flows.
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8! Here might be part of Harry's fight!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the twist you gave that. Poor Harry! He doesn't like it when things aren't what he expects, does he?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6...
Hmm, ''making a way out of no way''.
At least, we're starting to get some leeway here between the two, I was
wondering how you were going to make it possible. Now comes the hard
part of breaking through Harry's steel walls.
So, will we see through Harry any changes in how he fights, because of this
brief giving of...uhh...fluids?
Damn, first the drool in the last story, now blood in this one. As long as you
don't do golden showers we're alright. :-)
Hmm, ''making a way out of no way''.
At least, we're starting to get some leeway here between the two, I was
wondering how you were going to make it possible. Now comes the hard
part of breaking through Harry's steel walls.
So, will we see through Harry any changes in how he fights, because of this
brief giving of...uhh...fluids?
Damn, first the drool in the last story, now blood in this one. As long as you
don't do golden showers we're alright. :-)
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7!!! The bond is changing between them? Will Harry give in?