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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

person kazfeist
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very lovely beginning! I love postwar Hogwarts Professor stories! One small quibble: I think the school year in England starts September 1 and goes almost all the way through June. They have a longer break at Christmas and 'round Easter, I think. So Hermione would not have nine months at the school, but ten. You might want to check somewhere....I remember some forum, maybe FF.net, having the school year length as a subject and a British poster putting in the answer. Can't wait for the rest of the story, though! Your Draco sounds yummy! :D
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it the way it is. I can really see myself reading this.
I can't wait to see how the year unfolds for the two. Really looking forward to read
the next CH.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely beginning. I always like Hermione as a teacher! She said she wanted to do something important, and I can't think of anything better!

Close talking, he he.
person Coipje
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please continue
because darling this is very hot
I am sitting on the edge of my seat
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, aren't you on a writing frenzy...gosh, I'm going to have post and repost chapters with a single word in order to not have my fic pushed down! LOL - I like this darling. Sounds like fun. :-)
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great second chapter..so will we be privvy to Draco's POV? I hope so...sounds like he likes her.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!
Mmm... pressed up against a wall.
I can't believe you've got three stories going at the same time! Wait... FIVE? Wow!

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