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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate when she regrets her actions...so they slept together. Enjoy! It's not she's promiscuous. And its not like she won't do it again (oops, did I just write that?)! LOL
person Robs
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh, harsh, Hermione, harsh. I'm wondering if they will ever stop arguing for long enough to get into a real relationship. Although I think maybe Draco is being the more mature one here. Is he going to have to get all heroic and rescue Hermione from the World Serpent? Can't wait to see what happens!
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you keep things fast paced, and I can't wait to see the aftermath of the world serpents.
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it :). I hope a lot of action ensues!
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why can't someone be waiting for me at the door like that...oh yum!

The UST was soooo good. Hermione stop being so difficult. He's not a bad guy and he's HOT and he wants you!
person alm1067
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You stoped just when it was going to get good....but I wanted to tell you that I like your story. Please update soon. Thanks.
person Coipje
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well Hermione is one mean bitch if she wants to :D
Your very fast witch your updates wonderfull :D
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this, and I love your writing. Absolutely fantastic! Please keep up the wonderful work!
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. She's so snippy. You'd think she'd be in a better mood that morning. Ah well.
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're brilliant, did you know? Seriously. LOVING this story. Update soon, dearest!!!