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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

person Robs
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Ahhh, why can't Hermione just admit she wants him, LOL. It will be interesting to see what happens on their 'date' to Hogsmeade. Look forward to the next update!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She's jes' so silly!

I liked the student-teacher interaction, very appropriate.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wistful sigh* i wish dreamy draco was my professor. goodness knows i'd attend every single lecture and pay attention :) oh, this is absolutely divine so far. i'm really curious to know just who put those awful creatures in the lake (i keep thinking of lake placid every time one of those things pop up) and can't wait for hermione to finally come to her senses and realize draco is all too delicious to ignore.

can't wait for more!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was simply the best part of many to come... keep them coming
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yummy 2 Chapters! I'm glad she's finally showing a backbone!!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heh heh heh.
Not going to lie... I love bookshelves.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it is hot and i am loving the banter and i have to say go hermione
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LMAO - you go Hermione...now THAT'S how you trap a Slytherin. I adore her....LOL. Very clever indeed.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was funny!!! Keep them coming I love them all..