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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

person Robs
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent 2 chapters! Poor Draco, he really is crazy about her. I can't believe she rejected him like that! Ah well, maybe now she is pregnant she will realise she feels the same....I hope. She is going to tell him, right? Look forward to the next update!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh. whens she going to tell malfoy??
update soon
xxx
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, that was heartbreaking when Hermione couldn't respond to Draco. But lovin' it! Hahahahahahaha... I like being stuck in Hermione's head through all this, through her confusion and inability to process emotion. It's very Hermione from the books. :) Looking forward to how she tells Draco. This should be entertaining.
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Now that she is pregnant... they must get back together!! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how easy or how difficult you are going to make this situation with Hermione and Draco.
person andarte
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying it so far. I know all about muse issues -- I've had some of those recently myself. But I love the story, and I hope you update again soon. :)
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this fic!!!
Keep up the good work and Update soon!!
xoxo
person Robs
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOL, I can imagine Hermione being a very funny drunk. And the other teachers plotting at the end - made me chuckle! Draco really is putting up with a bit much crap from Hermione. Maybe soon she'll realise that it's all wasted...Look forward to more!
person Coipje
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another wonderfull chapter :D
hope you update soon :D
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny.....okay, I got really really really pissed at Hermione (no pun intended as she was pretty pissed, brit slang). She was so mean to Draco -- I mean, at some point she's got to let up. A man will only take so much. He obviously cares for her and she for him...enough with the stupid pride.

Go Sev! Love the last line.
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahah too cute! Oh god though, i can definately relate with Hermione's horrible realization of the night before and the things she'd done when she was drunk *shiver* and then people see you doing and saying horrible stupid thing! ARG THE SHAME! Oh life, that's why i hate drinking.