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for False Pretense

by ricerabbit

schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely story :D
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! one of my favorites i most say.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love your stories and your music recs. even more! I am steadily reading through everything you have written and I am jealous you are so prolific! It takes me forever to write a story and yours are so good! The music fits perfectly, I love it. Thank you for the great plots and fun stories to read.

~Tem
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was the cutest story ever
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RR: get Draco on that express Apparation or portkey or broom or whatever....damn it! LOL :-)
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wowie.

I've been anxiously awaiting an update to this, and lo and behold! My gooodness.
Preggers, and She's such a blimmin' idiot! Ten times over.
"Let's keep this professional" because having sex in a greenhouse is definitely a normal thing for fellow professors to do together. *rolls eyes*

Poor Draco. )-:
And you know, boo on Gabrielle. Who I actually feel bad for, as well, seeing as she's gonna get dumped soon. I hope.
person andarte
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, these last two chapters are like a bad cliffhanger that is distracting me from everything I'm working on at the moment. lol. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww! love it!! thanks for the bunch of updates! lol, i think my obsession with this story has been fulfilled. =]
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please add an epilogue with what house he ends up in and how the reast of the group react to him and his life growing up xx

Great story though
person kazfeist
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet! Nice name for the baby, though I've always been partial to Orion, myself. :D