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I found u!!!!!
Don't u dare stop writing, take your time ( not too much...) but don't leave me without new chapters. Pleeeeeeeease
Thanks soo much for this wonderful serie. My ( your, ok) snape is just Wonderful, and what about Draco? The Zabinis? And harry? great job. I'm sooooo ready for their "chatter" .. Thanks again
Take care, live long and do prosper

I have read the Redemption series and Forgiveness and plan to make proper reviews on both (and not sound stupid when I do it).

I just had to re-read this one again since I liked it so much the first time. I had read this first (naughty of me I know) before the others. But this story is what hooked me!

I haven't read Miss Patel Takes a Holiday yet but it's next on the list! (Unless there is one I need to read before that. Let me know, yeah?)

Decided to take a stroll through your Redemption series and the accompanying byways. A beautiful construct. I only wish you'd chosen to have Draco be redeemed by Hermione, but that's my own predilection. Thanks for the lovely stories! :D

Yay for another chappie! RL does tend to get in our ways, doesn't it?


The mental image of Draco in a cowboy hat is at once both intriguing and humorous. Lucius even more so.

Touching letter from Severus to Minerva. Draco's letters even more so.

This is a very nice story and I can't wait for more.

More please, I like this! It's always been a guilty pleasure of mine reading stories where the Malfoys have redeemed themselves, but only if it's believeable. It's hard to credibly do that, but you've done a good job with Draco's character in this one!

(Chapter 3)

Yay for the update!

I liked it that Harry is an ex-smoker. It makes him less than perfect, and I like that. I liked the part about him going back to Privet Drive with the intention of messing the house up too, and Dudley coming along and he and Harry making amends. The brawl surprised me....I don't really see Draco as the brawling type, although for some reason I can clearly see Harry engaging in something like that. I laughed that they got arrested, and how Harry rushed to write to Ginny about it before she heard it elsewhere. I love reading the letters, I love the way Harry writes to Ginny, I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I'm looking forward to Harry and Draco finding Severus and what he has to say about that, and their reaction at finding him married with children. Update soon please! o

I am so looking forward to the chapter, I wish it was already here! You are a superb writer and I truly enjoy your work!

OK, I admit, I am one of those horrible people that read and read and read...and rarely review. Not b/c I like PWP though. I look for real stories, and the ones that really touch me...I make it known! I'll admit, I've read just about everything on your list. I love them all! I just get SO into the stories that I just want to hurry up & read the next chapter!! I don't know if you have an update email list or not...I'll go back & review every story of yours I've read just to give you one if you like! :-) They are amazingly written and it's not a bunch of mindless sex....it draws you in & makes you feel as if you're right there. Thank you!

(Chapter 2)

I like the burgeoning relationship between Harry and Draco. I like how you keep them in character, and didn't suddenly make them the best of friends. I like Harry's easy goiing manner, and I like it that Draco still has his reservations. I love the letters that they both write home to their wives, which highlight the differences between them so well. Draco is the one questioning the validity of them seeking out Severus, whether it is the right thing to do or not, and just how much of an interruption they'll cause in his life, yet he isn't ready to call the whole thing off because he needs to see how Severus is doing. I like that they're driving across America rather than flying or apparating or portkeying. It like it that Draco is apprehensive about Harry's driving ability; his disbelief that Harry had a real driving license was a nice touch.

And Severus. I love your Severus. I love Severus and Antonia together, and I liked how she defends him and protects him, and he lets her, accepts it, yet he is still so in character. I'm so happy that he's got her and a family of his own, Stella and Joseph Pony, but now children of his own as well. I love it that although he's somewhat crippled, using canes/crutches, he and Antonia still have a very active and obviously very satisfying love life. Lots to love in this chapter, and I can't wait for more.

This is bloody brilliant! Keep it up.