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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Do more.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good start!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There isn't enough to review yet. Ask us after a few chapters. We can give you ideas etc but nothing on how your story is going. I love wolverine Harry pairing though. Always on the look out for more!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Much better. Nice enough length. You'll need to continue the update speed for the first few chapters so that you build loyal readers. I don't know anything about Victor but will probably find out more as the fic continues. But I do wonder if he and Wolverine are estranged? If Harry is in trouble with Logan save him?
I'm glad you didn't have Ron freak out too much-it's becomming much to cliche for him to betray Harry. Ok if they grow apart but why always the drama with those two you know?
Is this going to be some sort of s and m fic? Not thrilled about things like that or bloodplay etc. Look forward to next chapter!
I'm glad you didn't have Ron freak out too much-it's becomming much to cliche for him to betray Harry. Ok if they grow apart but why always the drama with those two you know?
Is this going to be some sort of s and m fic? Not thrilled about things like that or bloodplay etc. Look forward to next chapter!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you remember that victor did actually care about his brother. In a twisted sort of way. Also according to the comics...he was called dog, and the guy Logan killed was named logan and was the groundskeeper and dogs father...It could be interesting to use that.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I cant wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm becoming so addicted to all of your stories.
Borderline obsessed but I love them so much lol.
Please update soon =]
Borderline obsessed but I love them so much lol.
Please update soon =]
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do hate Sabertooth
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love where this story appears to be heading. I hope you finish this work.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh that was great! now victor is after harry.... the suspense...!!
haha
i just saw the wolverine movie this weekend, so its kinda cool to suddenly see a fic starting where the movie left off.
when will logan meet harry i wonder...
cant wait for that!
and it'll be cool to see how logan will react to victor being after harry, even though he doesnt know who victor is......
anyway, excuse my rambling... i really liked this fic!
continue!!!
update soon please!
cant wait and i'm already looking forward to it!!!! : )
haha
i just saw the wolverine movie this weekend, so its kinda cool to suddenly see a fic starting where the movie left off.
when will logan meet harry i wonder...
cant wait for that!
and it'll be cool to see how logan will react to victor being after harry, even though he doesnt know who victor is......
anyway, excuse my rambling... i really liked this fic!
continue!!!
update soon please!
cant wait and i'm already looking forward to it!!!! : )