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September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really hate to say, this is really badly written. I find the pacing bad, characters' actions unbelievable, and the writing itself leaves much to be desired.
That said, there are some good points to your tale, and if you practiced writing smut and your storytelling you may have a bit of a gem.
That said, there are some good points to your tale, and if you practiced writing smut and your storytelling you may have a bit of a gem.
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
would love the proper version if possible, would make reading much easier for me.
my email is; kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
Thanks
my email is; kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
Thanks
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. update soon please.
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Do continue, I hope there will be an even hotter session between her and Severus!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My god this is HOT! You just have to continue with it!
Well done!
Well done!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that this is PWP, but in a reasonable scenario. And great job using the best-suited person (Hermione) to do research and write porn pamphlets!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start to your story.
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great start. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.