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good chapter

that was really hot!!

You misspelled Elixir. There are some things I don't understand (like tares) in this, but am enjoying the story nonetheless. Give me some time and I'll work up a pic for you that looks like an actual marvel.com profile for Angelous (including history). Just give me any and all info needed (including codename) and I'll set it up for you. Send it to me at cassidy_lord_of_sound@yahoo.com. BTW, I wonder what Elixir's reaction was since they started fucking in front of him?

Yay, an update!!!!!! I have been waiting with bated breath for this update. I really love this story! I also love your crossover with Tin Man. please continue you both or I'll just die! Peace Love and Chocolate!!!!

awww! they did it!
*coos*
well, not exactly with angelous, but he was involved.
this was wonderful!!! i loved this chapter!!
awww, but i hate what jean did to him.
i'm glad that elixar helped though.
looking forward to the next update soon!!

Oh my gohd I cried!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And then I went and started sharpening my knifes before I realized that this is a story and I can't kill fictional characters.

Damn do-gooders thinking they know what's best for other people!!!
DAMN IT!!!
Okay! Yay! I can't wait for an update, this is awesome.

ack! that's it!!??
aw, i wanted to read more! haha
what did jean do to angelous? did she hurt him by blocking his mind?
more, more!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
update soon!!!!!!!

intreasting story, great so far! can't wait to see what happens next! and please make it soon? please?(give big soulful puppy dog eyes) hope Jean has learnt her lesson and Harry is ok! 1000000000 out of 10!

Very interesting story so far. The daily profit articles were interesting. I'm was horrified at the article with ron and how the headmaster was manipulating harry so blatantly, and the wizarding world is ok with this? But then from the books the wizarding world (of Britain) has been trained by the headmaster not to think. Anyone who has a different option is considered a troublemaker or a deatheater. Their main paper is a gossip column that controls what people think. I hope the x-men protect him from harm. I also wonder if some of his abilities came from his magic? He has focused all his magic abilities into such a narrow outlet. I o believe that Jean and Scott want to help Harry they are going about it the wrong way. They are the opposites of Logan and Remy because they had never truly seen the evil of mankind.