rate_review Reviews

Really like the story! Chapter 14 was up before I happened across it, or I would have reviewed sooner: although I must confess that the misspellings of the character's names do rather grate on me: Mystique, Magneto, and most particularly Rogue; mainly because with the 'o' and the 'u' round the wrong way you have Rouge, who is a character from Sonic the Hedgehog. You aren't the only writer on this site to make that mistake though, so take heart, you're in good company.

I commend you on an entertaining plot, plenty of action, and an original treatment of the characters while keeping them quite believable, that said your dialogue for Remy is a bit 'off', there are places where the 'accent' is not quite right. Nevertheless, I'll be following the next development with enthusiasm, even if you don't choose to take any of these points into account (it's your story after all).

I really liked this chapter, it only leaves open a few questions. As long as they get answered in the future, I'm perfectly happy with this chapter >D

I still like this story very much and am thrilled that you updated finally. It's been along time since the last one.

I don't know what bothers you in this chapter, it seemed quite well done to me... Well, other that you had misspelled Magneto at atleast one point, but that's neither here nor there.

I fervently hope you'll be able to update a bit sooner next time, but RL is a bitch and can bite anytime so I won't hold my breath.

Thank you for the update, I wish you luck with your writing and await with baited breath for the next update, this was very interesting!

great story i skip over the sex but it is good cant wait for more

I absolutly love this story. You will continue it won't you? I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!)

wonderful cant wait for more

wonder what happened to angelous. he didn't do anything bad to himself, did he? gosh, It's horrible that he's still so confused after all this time. I wish he'd get better at least a little.....
i look forward to the next chapter! hope it's updated soon!! ; )

I love this story. I especially love how you switch between different points of view and how you incorporated the fairy tales. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

i think the plan of attack should include kurt and whoever else starting by popping down to the bottom level of the base to secure the freaks since the guards first job will be to kill the freaks.

Wow that was an interesting chapter. But I do have one question will Elixer be added to harry's little pack of a family he has going on?