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for A Chance at Life

by Lina03

schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! This is just wodnerful story! I just discovered this day and I am so hooked with this. The interactions with the family is just so adorable. Although it's a little bit sad how Eileen saw her situattion. But it was a little bit unavoidable since Sev is so attached to Harry. But I'm glad that they're cleared the air out now.
Ohh and Lucius! It'd be so exciting if he began to obsess with Harry and the obsession would just grow as he matures! The possibilities it'd provide... yummie :D
Thanks for your hard work, I hope that you will update soon!
person Darkless
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love coming across a unique plot. Nicely done.

Please, may I have some more?
person layla
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story and how you got harry to save severus and his mother. I find it interesting how much harry has grown up and is so willing to protect them. Please continue for I am curious to see what will happen next.
person Minnie
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, especially that Eileen and Severus do not trust Harry at first glance and that he is still vulnerable, despite being powerful! Another fact I like is that he does not abuse his knowledge of the future in a 'I'm now going to change everything to my liking' way but does not completely ignore it either. I hope Severus and Harry will develope a father/son relationship, because that would be really unique, I can not remember reading that anywhere before! I love slash, but in this case I really want to see Harry as a father figure... Your little Severus is exactly as I imagined Severus to be at that age. Is Harry going to meet the Malfoys soon? I can't wait to read how you describe the 14 year old Lucius. I'm sure he's even more of a brat than Draco.
person tf
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just found this fic and love it; thanks for sharing!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love story