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Oh!!!! Hot and Nasty!!!!

Hot AF!!!!!

HOT!!! HOT!!! Especially the last paragraph...

Hermione is truly a lucky wench! Seriously, who wouldn't want to experience such passion, hey?
;~D

VERY WELL done - keep up the good work.
:)

Is there gonna be more to this one? I want to read about any possible *punishments* Severus will have for Hermione in detention.

wonderful fun~!

I refuse to let you leave it there! *stomps foot!* please continue with this story, I love that you dont have sev as an insecure bumbling fool! Update!

Awesome!Great sequel!!!

There didn't seem to be a problem with your English like you siad that there may be in your note. Though I have to say that even if there had been that it wouldn't have detracted from the wonderful story that you wrote. I mean, just wow! I totally love it because it is just amazingly ace! You did a great job, the characters were pretty much spot on (especially Severus). I really think you should think about putting both halves of this story together to make the beginning of a bigger one, you could definitley do something amazing with your plot.

Thanks for writing this and please think about writing more. <3

Very nice sequel! (fanning self) and don't worry about your english, I think it's better than mine! you know, this could become a very nice series, if you really wanted it to.