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by ChooseToLive

person Sophia
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. Such a little story, yet with so many emotions packed into it. This really worked for me.

Absolutely
person Alaine
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You know, sometimes you're just looking for nothing in particular and you come across a story like this. It stuns me, and it silences me. Beautiful and many-layered with complex feelings on the surface and beneath it. I don't think there really is any thing else to say. Really well done.
person knj4k4
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. That was incredibly emotional. I feel for both of them, but some how the characters seem reversed.