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for Summer with the Dursleys

by CrisNoWait

schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was not graphic however very emotional event, go you ^^

can't wait for more,
~eros
person MewMew2
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job, you certainly know how to use your words to convey a sense of suspense and impending doom! I believe that it would have been 'scarier' if it were more clear to the reader that Harry's ashes are what fell out of the casket. When you said 'they watched their friends remains fall out of the casket,' I was thinking chunks of flesh and a horrid smell similar to roadkill after a good rain. Nevertheless, a wonderful job. Please update once more when possible.
person polka dot
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well the Minister sounds definitely like a bad guy and at the very least highly unethical. But if the end is so near and Draco was so in love with Harry at the funeral then maybe he should have waited a couple of months into the school year when he was already with Harry and Harry would be more likely to believe him.
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That soon!!! I sooooo need chapter 9!!!
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
waits for more hura
~ero
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly!!! Is that smart? Soooo need chapter 8!!!
person polka dot
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh fun a funeral. Ha ha, yeah I'm mean today. Too much yardwork, I sympathize with Harry.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke! That's a lot of people who died! I sooooo need chapter 7!!!
person Polka dot
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very cute, and timely I have been doing a lot of gardening, no help from hot blondes though
person Juana13
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, so draco is from the future where harry dies? how sad...
hopefully harry will learn to like draco soon : )