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for Lonely

by pittwitch

schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM

You describe him so well, that while I'm sure that I would have loved to see the art (the LJ was purged), I can picture the moment so clearly in my mind, that it's not needed.

The way you ended the scene sent chills up my spine. This was beautifully done.

Thank you for sharing this.