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Really love this story but is it right that Harry enters this relationship without Sev knowing about what he is? Also what of Harry's gardians (who he also has a sexual relation with) shouldn't they be told at least? I think Sev would be very good for Harry and even if he shares sometimes I can see him giving him the same cleaning afterwards and reclaiming him. I think Sev will want to thank Lucius for Draco and helping with Harry. Harry wiht his special case can also help other male couples have kids. Like Sirus and Remus. Sev and Him. Even Lord Voldemort but I don't see Harry being one of Tom lowly workers or even allowing him to mark him as such. Maybe mark him as a equal or heir.

Great Job! Loved it. I will email you about being a beta on the previous chapters. :D

I just love the sev/harry realationship. You do well with it and I didn't find too many errors. I would be happy to beta for you if you wish. I don't have any stories that you can read, but I always did well in creative writing. Let me know if no one else wants to help. I can be reached at Yahoo with the same name. So what is Harry going to do during the summer?

Wow wonderful so he is Severus's will Sev have others particpat in there relation and when is he going to find out what harry is?

BLOODY FUCKIN FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!! AND YUMMY!!!!!!!
wow, that was intense... and i really should get some of that potion stuff..... haahahhahaha!
looking forward to the next chapter!!! hope theres more snarry sex!!!
update again soon please!! : )

That was awesome. You really have a flare and I give your muse extra bonus points and a piece of chocolate cake for that one. I Severus going to brand Harry? Or maybe put a collar on him that no one can see but him and Harry? Something Dumbledore would not detect but still keep Harry bound to Severus. Sev is going to have to do something, everyone is going to be after Harry if he doesn't. Of course Sirius and Remus can't know yet either. Thanks for the Chapter.

That chapter made my day!

I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.

Yay!! Finally!! That was great. Would have enjoyed it even more if Sev had been more pissed off that "some student" had taken Harrys precious virginity.I mean after all those nights its just snapped away from him. I would have thought he would have gone out and discreetly cursed that fifth year into a teaspoon or something. and not even a nicely engraved teaspoon,we're talking a cheap plastic one,lol. Can't wait till Sev finds out about what Harry really is and who REALLY poped his cherry!!

Oh and I'm seeing a vibrating butplug in the future and maybe a kitty tail but plug? Pleaseeee? ^_^ Oh and you could have Sev mark him with a tatoo of a snake that moves and does interesting things to Harrys body while he is sitting in class working hard...