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for The Children of Atum

by ajgordon

schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Loooved :D
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find this story very intresting and the last chapter where Harry and Severus first get together, at least to me, wans't a rape scene, trust me on that, have done several rape scenes. I rather liked that chapter and hope that Remus and Sirius take Harry decision well. Keep going, :D
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have just read threw all of what you have wrote so far and can now say i really like this at first i struggled with the concept but the excillant writing kept me reading also knowing harry was a creature made it easier at the begining i had to see him as a miniture adult to get to grips with it if im making anysense the inhanced inteligence and magical ability but now hes well a little older ;-) i am quite intralled i do love harry&snape stories i thought there first time together was very good
i love the others who have appeared
i do have one question i am not to aware of sub dom relationships and have read in your story harry is snapes sub and harry is to only be with snape unless given permission would the same apply to snape, would he be exclusive to harry or will he still be allowed to shag about ???
keep going i love this
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, be careful with the contract part though, Written down it could easily become a magical binding thing and that takes away the freewill of Harry to wander to Sirius and Remus when he goes back home.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I've been reading this for a while (sry i havent reviewed b4) but its such a great story.
I love your Harry and how he fits into the world that you've altered
This description of BDSM was really well written and it was really interesting.
I havent read a really good BDSM story in a while, and i'm glad my newest one is yours.
The smexi scenes you write are just AMAZING and i can't wait for more!!!
Great chapter
Great story
Can't wait for the next one!!!
-Kyle
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome update! :)
I can't wait to see what happens next. >;D
person Juana13
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved this! And i'm glad that sev informed harry and all that. its good that harry now understands everything before being thrown in head first into something he'd be unsure about. its bad enough that he's cursed.
love this and hope to see the next chapter soon : )
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written, I am also happy to see that your BDSM facts are good. I cannot wait to read more.
person blackcub
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You actually have some of the written stories out there even w/out a beta while still being compared to those stories. I love this story and would be honored to beta for you. My email is candymlb@hotmail.com.
Mariah
person knj4k4
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but review upset you. I don't think i explained myself well. I was upset at his fear and lack of understanding. I love BDSM, and I was afraid that this was going to end up being a perversion. Your explanations however eased my mind. I was afraid that if would be about pain and power without care, instead of the deep emotions of love, desire, control, and submission by choice it requires. I was afraid that Harry would end up submitting without fully understanding what was happening and that Severus wouldn't truly care about his pet. I'm glad you explained it and that I can be sure he isn't being abused. Anyway...sorry I upset you. good chapter.