rate_review Reviews

great chappy

-grin- I love this story, I think it's one of the hottest out there right now... buuuut... not to be mean or anything, I just wanted to point out that Snape removes Harry's knickers twice in this story... ;o) I mena, he IS effective and everything, but that might be overdoing it...? ;o)

Wow I very happy you up dated, I thought you stop writing. As for Harry's punishment I don't know one Harry risked his life again and his freedom, plus he kept something from his Master that affects them both in a way lieing to him. On the flip side he was protecting himself and doing what Remus and Sirus dirrected, will Sev find out about there relaltionship with Harry? I think if thee is a punishment then it would have to be based on the lieing and lack of trust.

Welcome back!! Regarding appropriate punishment, wouldn't depriving sexual gratification be a good one? After all, his creature thrives on it and the holding back of sex would be a very painful punishment. However, severus should understand why he didn't say anything about it, it would put him in danger with Dumbledore if it got out. However, the way he handled the troll sould show that Harry has a bit of the warrior in him as well, he is not just "another pretty face". His intellegence and quick thinking shows that he is not just concubine or a pet, that he could hold his own in a fight. Maybe he's a combanation of the two? See, I have been reading more than the sex parts! LOL Anyway welcome back and happy writing!

I definately think Severus should find out about the purring soon. It needs to happen for them to continue to grow together.

I really like the story so far. Is Harry ever going to tell Severus about the curse? I think he should. Also, are Remus and Sirius going to find out about the pet thing? That would be interesting. Do you think Harry could ask Severus to invite Draco? That would be interesting. Please post more soon!

Great story, SableSilverain suggested that I read this and I am really glad she had me read this, love the collar bit btw.

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I really love this story so far and I have to say... even if it does make me seem like a perv (oh well :) ) I find the idea of Harry sucking Sev's thumb and suckling his cock through the night so hot and I just don't know why I don't read it more in fics. Anyway, can't wait to read more

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Writing all the details can be difficult, I had just assumed that Harry was not in Quidditch because of being Severus' pet. I mean why would Severus want his apprentice to be away for Quidditch when he has other more interesting persuits for the boy? We knew this was AU from the beginning so don't worry about the flying thing. I do enjoy this story, it's different and refreshing and I love the needy Harry with the grown up and child mixed together.