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by ajgordon

person knj4k4
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a serious hunger for rimming and fisting, but I cannot stand noncon. you asked...thank you for answering my question about Snape and the other kiddys.
person knj4k4
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
According to Canon yes she is Sirius mum..I like it. very hot.
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Walburga is the name lised on HP lexicon as Sirius' mother.

good chapter ^_^
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am suppost to be working not reading naughty stories but thats how it goes sometimes. Love the whole curse made Harry this way bit and am glad you didn't delved too deep into sex with a child bit. Harry needs to be loved and not abused. Wonder what Snape will say when he finds out? and does Albus have nefarious reasons for this particular spell? Was he hoping for a little action on the side or did the spell backfire on him and he really wanted a true warrior? Seems as if Harry went to the more fem side of things. I look forward to more of the story and if my opinion counts for anything, I love the Snarry bit.
person knj4k4
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus is a teacher...I love chan but is it going to be only Harry? or does he have others at school?
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I woul love for you to keep going and I know you didn't answer my questions before so here they are again. Will Harry have a mate, what about an animagus form? Will he go th Hogwarts? Please keep going thank you
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, if this is a threesome/moresome story, it needs to be in the correct category. We're not trying to nitpick, we just don't want to see your story removed by the admins.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is a good start. I look forward to reading more. you should google snake magic or sex if you are going that far with it. i have often wondered why these type of stories don't use it more. harry is a parslemouth after all and can talk to the snake. i am assuming that the idea is not to tramatize harry but to use sex magic and walburga was talking about to increase his magic? i look forward to the next update.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Do more!
person sanda
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter