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My preference would be that you not regurgitate the happenings at Hogswart, canon, but I don't care much for PWP stories either. Your story would be able to follow along the same path you started if a lot of the Hogwarts material centered on Snape's attraction and what Dumbledore's doing to interfere. Not really sure how much of a friendship Harry can have with children his age, Hermione and Ron, with his libido on full tilt, though. So, looking forward to Snape discovering Harry's heritage, birthright?...... curse.....

I really like the way your story is developing
so I think it should contain more sex scenes and not much more plot
(since there are already enough stories like that). XD

There are not many stories with minor!sub!Harry,
I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. ;-)

I vote for more sex scenes and not much more plot. Thanks for writing and sharing your story.

continue as you have been . I LOVER SMUT!!!1. LOL!
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I love this chapter. Will there be another scene which Harry tempts Snape? Because that scene was awesome!

Ok this is really an interesting story. I have been reading it as my guilty pleasure, cause I am squicked by Harry's age, but I keep coming back.

Ok I think I got it Harry (Might want to change his name) is a child of Atum very powerful extra... He is ment to have mutiple lovers but one mate, Sev, Right Sev will be dom and have some contral over Harry but Harry will be Harry. He is going to Hogwarts. Where I guess Sev will help feed Harry's needs along with Remus, and Lucius and Tom. I don't see the kids there helping they would be able to handle it. I am suprise Remus doesn't know Harry's mate is Sev. and with all the Help he has been and the contact he has with Harry REmus and Sirus didn't tell Sev teh truth. Love the story

Poor Severus, he gets left out all the time. He needs Harry too. I really like that pair. May 18 is my birthday maybe Remus and Sirius could let Sev in on their secret a little? Sev is suppose to start Occlumency isn't he? You know that man needs something more than doing all the work himself while Harry sleeps. I really thought Siri and Rem would realize that if they were feeling the draw then Severus must too. Of course they don't look at Snape as having any feelings so maybe it didn't occur to them. I love the fact that no one can touch Harry's wand. It was a really good idea that I have not seen before. Really great chapters, thanks for the update and keep em coming.

Thanks sweetheart!! I liked this chapter, Harry is addorible.

its a very nice & original fic, it has good narrative and even if harry is still 6 his allure explains the desire the other 3 men have for him, cant wait for more, and well, Remus