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for The Children of Atum

by ajgordon

person knj4k4
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chapter for me...sorry I only just now got time to read it.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love kinky stories! I was wondering if you are often going to focus on other pairing(which I hope you don't >_<(sorry I'm a main character lover))? I definitely wouldn't stop reading, I would just... skip over. I love your story!
person Elphaba
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ackkkkkk, you are pairing up LM and his son? Did you make Draco a by-product of this spell as well? Or does you story depict all Dark Wizards as pedophiles?
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter and please continued with the current style.
person kitty08
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I personally would like a bit more plot. I think it would be great than. And maybe Voldemort could become Harrys master? I love Slytherin pairings! please update soon!!!
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great!!!! I say go for it and see what you can do. Plots can be exciting in themselves and make the sex even more scrumptous.
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loveeeee it. I hope for more soon thank you for answering my questions. One request Snape is probable the only one who could push but not push him away. Snape for husband pleaseeeeee
Thanks Wolfcathope
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i do like this sory but i hope that sev and harry marry along with sir and remus that would be nice no voldy yuck
person Kiiyouko
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! This story is HOT! I love it! Please update soon.