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for The Children of Atum

by ajgordon

schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!! I am absolutely LOVING this story!! I cant wait to read more!! NO HET PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!!
person Hambares
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story! I think your muse is doing an excellent job. And I find nothing at all wrong with Draco being dominant. I love him that way!
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oopsies, Harry was so caught up in the moment, he didn't cast a contraceptive charm when Draco had his turn.
person Elphaba
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. i much prefer draco as dominate. harrys such a cute little bottom. i cant wait to read more.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You wrote that Harry apologized for the accidental magic remembering that the Dursleys had tried to beat the magic out of him. He was only there for 3 months as a baby. He wouldn't have been showing magic at the time nor would he have remembered it.
person MistressRaven
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting and I look forward to reading more. I do hope that with Draco's training and Snape loving both Harry and Draco that there will be a threesome involved.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to first say that I love your story. I love not only the detail in every chapter but how you started with what felt like cannon characters and you're allowing them to grow in a likable and realistic way in comparison to the story and what their purposes are in the story.

That said I say NO HET! :) Lubes good but we really don't need sweet cuddly Harry all fishy.

<3 Can't wait to read more!!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I without a doubt have to say that het in this story is a no go. i like ur story just the way it is.
person blackcub
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. For the poll I have to say no het but you could do some het side stories so people who would stop reading the story if it had het like myself are satisfied and those who want it can still have a little het action. Please consider this because I LOVE this story.