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Loved the new chapter :) hugs for the amazingness dank you more please!

Wow! I go visit my father for the weekend and come home to find not one but three new chapters. Cookies for the next week and 100 Slytherin points!!!! Severus should definately spank Harry for his loose ways. He is an apprentice and as such, should report to Severus for everything he needs and does. Right? He will have to wear a cock ring all day to be reminded of how Severus is the master of his apprenticeship and how EVERYTHING he does as school is with Severus' approval. I can see several times where Harry is 'punished' because he let his natural self loose and Severus took exception to it. I can also see him 'punished' when Sev finds out about Harry's condition. As his master he will have to know and Harry will have to let it slip or Sev will have to find out another way. Of course this is all contigent on your muse that takes over and comes up with such delicious little plot twists and turns. Have to love that muse.

Its so close to rape it bothers me., like how he didn't really want some of the things Severus did...I guess I want something other then a relationship based on his lust for Harry's body..sorry. Its well written but it kind of makes me sick. at least Remus and Sirius loved him...the virgin potion was a neat idea.

I think Severus should definitely bring out the paddle! That would be very entertaining!

Wonderful story so far. I'm not one for Harry Potter stories, but you captured my interest with this one and I am glad that I started reading this one. I can't wait til you update again. Keep up the great work!

ooooooooh, finally some harry/draco action!! yay!! : )
i hope theres more sex between them again in the future. oh, that'd be hot for a draco/harry/severus threesome...
cant wait for the snarry scene!
update next chapter soon please!!! cant wait!! : )
already looking forward to it!!

Wonderful, as always. And super, amazing hot! I can't wait to see Sev and Harry together finally, and to see Sev's reaction to Harry's little secret. Thank you for updating so quickly I simply love checking the Harry Potter section and every time I see your story at the top with a new chapter it gives me a huge grin.

My only question would be, well Draco is still only an 11 year old boy. So in general one would assume he isn't that well endowed and Harry seems to like a larger size. I say that because of the situation before Sirius ever had sex with him and he kept moving from smaller dildo to the next and with his experience with Sirius and Remus and even the Slytherin 5th year that he might like something bigger. And if that is the case why would Harry enjoy Draco quite as much? I know he loves the dirty talking, and so do I very much so, but could that override all other things as well?

Either way, besides little things like that, it was mind blowing and super hot!

Looking forward to the next chapter, and the next, and the next, oh hell I'm just looking forward to it all in general.

Great job keep it up, and just let your muse run wild!!!

Severus so need to give harry an anema. Since the Naughty boy has let himself be dirtied by someone else. He has to be pure for Severus aftr all. As for punishemnt well i cant really think of anything right now but i'll review again if i can.

damn, how do u come up with stories so fast

wow Harry still going to be Snape's right what of children?