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for Crawling back to you

by yamiyugi

person :(
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and why snape not on his knees // if he so wish Harry back and the song said it :( ...

Harry looks like rag :( borring
person Alaine
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really did like the concept of the story, but there were a few spelling mistakes. Maybe you should consider a beta? The story itself was sweet and I do think you did a very good job on the last few lines. Please do not take this review as 'flaming', but more as constructive critism to help you be a better author:)
person knj4k4
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww...good story.