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for Beauty of the Swan

by ArwendeImladris

schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol! I'm loving this! It was great seeing Harry grows up. I really like the idea of him being a Healer. Legolas should also have chance to change and mature (he needs to be shown growing up like Harry or else he'll still be a mean brat). ANd i love how you transformed the characters Edenost and Ithilwen as a Neville and Luna. Thanks for the updates! Will wait eagerly for more!!! :D
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. I don't normally read crossovers. In fact, this is the first crossover I have ever read, and I am happy to say that I love it. I do hope you update soon, because I am very excited to know what will happen next. As for flashes of Legolas' training, I think it would be fine to show some but it would only have to be ones that were directly significant to how he has turned out (matured?). Adding in flashes just for the sake of having them might be distracting and pointless to the reader, but that is just my personal opinion so don't take it too seriously.
person hiyayaka
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GO FOR IT BUT I REALLY WANT LEG AND HAR TO MET SOON
person Trallala
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this is so qute! Little Harry is adorable, I can't wait to see what happens when they grow up :0)
person alma
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start!
person knj4k4
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I like the way he has to grow up and I like Harry's way to prove useful.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
KYAHHH!!! Poor little Harry! Legolas is being hateful and I can't wait to read more of your story if only to read how Harry turns out. Ooooh, I hope Harry gives it to them good!
person Sakya
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I want Legolas to suffer (this is a first, really). Can you please, please, please, please (ad infinitum et ad nauseum) make Legolas AND the twins chase after Harry like is going out of fashion? And, of course, Harry should be hard to get. hehehehe.
person knj4k4
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so mean...goodness.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooo want to slap him. I just can't wait until their older.