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for Beauty of the Swan

by ArwendeImladris

schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! waiting impatiently for the next chapter!!
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! i like this a alot!!! More please!!
person knj4k4
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that he's grown up but its still arrogant and angry...we'll maybe I don't like it but its a mark of a good author.
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha...and of course, with his friend being injured he sounded like a jerk. He needs a healer....lol. It is going to take more than an apology to make Harry forgive him, and to get past Edenost.
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good. That should toughen Legolas up.
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story . please write more soon .
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow really beutiful please keep going
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this story so far and i can't wait for them to reunite. i hope harry gives him hell;)
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huh...that's actually pretty clever. I thought Ithelwen(sp?) was acting kinda familiar. I never would have guessed you had translated their names into Elvish. I don't think you need to show too much of Legolas' training...though a few embarassing moments may help satisfy the need for revenge. You know, Legolas having a poncy arrogant moment only for someone to slap him down a few pegs.
person knj4k4
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe a few short flashes of Legolas, I'm impatient to get back to his punishment by Harry.

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