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for Beauty of the Swan

by ArwendeImladris

schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. poor Harry, I think he would be adorable with the gaurd, but I know he is with Legalos. A three way love would be awesome!
Anyways. I look forward to more please let me know when you update again
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person Jan
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely adore this freaking story! Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan
person alma
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
person Rokkis
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. Although, if you are seriously going to have Harry appose and be slighted by Legolas, then I seriously doubt that he would have managed to stay so indifferent... He actually seemed slightly open to Legolas' advances in the chapter... despite saying what an arrogant git he is:D

Cheers!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Harry with a baby, how cute.
person Kiiyouko
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is in so much trouble! I can't wait to see what happens now!
person alma
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
person alma
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Am I sensing a conflict in the future? Great chapter!
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damnation!! That's it? I've seen this story before on the page, and I only just now read it. And I am sorry. :( It is very well written, and I love Harry and I love Legolas. What a prat he was to treat Harry like that!! Oh he's going to regret it, well, he's regretting it already isn't he? I kind if figured the naked dancinf female elf, (whose name I cannot remember) was Luna. Who else but her, would not only do something like that, but say something like that in response to Harry's question. I love Luna. She's such a great character. Oh and Neville, so sweet how he is Harry's second fiercest protector. Poor Harry, he's so pretty, and he's got all these horny elves panting after him. LOL. I love that he's a healer and he found a place for himself. I loved imagining him as a tiny elfling with big green eyes and messy black hair. So cute. I want a Harry elfling. LOL. Well, I can't wait to read more, and I hope I don't miss any updates. This is one of the sections that has dozens of updates a day, and it's easy to get lost in the shuffle. ^.^

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