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by ricerabbit

schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! My favorite part was that he wasn't hiding the Dark Mark, like it was just something he and Hermione (and the rest of the wizarding world?) had accepted. Very cool. Plus, I bet he's got a fan club about it, which is awkward, but expected. Anyway, well done!
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person alm1067
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the day out in the Muggle world is a great idea. Please update soon, I want to see where you take this.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fun little ride! That was a great date and I love that they were still both so snarky about it, while being sweet. Great job. Looking forward to more soon, HG4eva
person smmz79
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chao i really really like it although this was a 'one night stand' i do not see draco as the type ofguy that would clean up after himself or even take the care to hang up her dress if it really was a meaning less shag to him... the sex was great well written definitely.... can not wait to see what happens next
person smmz79
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chap.... and you are right draco could just be anal about being tidy so i guess we will see.... so she is fretting about her feelings on their night together and he is in town asking her out i am looking forward to your next chap i cannot wait to see what happens at lunch...
person ancheto
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha love it! Draco's cheeky =P
Great story, looking forward to more!
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Don't tell me that you didn't try and check out my bum cause I know that you did cause your friend told me you liked it" :) Really enjoying this fic and the background music. The one for the sex scene made it so different than if I had read it by itself. I think it was perfect. Please update asap!!
person kazfeist
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning! Loved the two chapters, so far. :D
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok...Now I am hooked and anxiously waiting for the next update!
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I love how he cleaned the place up, very Draco. (-: Update when you get the chance!