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by ricerabbit

person kittycat30
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So much has happened! I feel for both of them. They're both stubborn and blind!!! I can't wait for someone to smack them both!!!
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you're not nice anymore. This chapter depressed me. Not that i dont like it i like it so much that i feel lost too just like Hermione. I'm confused. Who's the injured party here? Why is Draco being such a bastard? The things he said to her is unforgivable! Hermione have a right to do what she did and yet Draco acted as if he was the one who was wronged. Poor Hermione he loves the prat so much. How could she survived now without him? But please i dont want a pathetic Hermione! She should show him that she isnt affected by his indiferrence! She made it too easy for Draco to catch her before now i hope she would make him beg before she accepts him back to her life.

Great wrting!!!
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely
person smmz79
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah great chap... i love the way you have written the beginning of their relationship.... oh and hermione should recieve a howler or two but she just needs to lead her own life and be happy..... great job
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Sorry I can't be more eloquent in my review this week, but I just got in from a much-needed weekend at the beach. :-) I, of course, enjoyed every word of this update and thank you for it. I will write more next time. Have a great week! HG4eva
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this, it's like a breath of fresh air. I write my deep dark stories and then read this and feel like I've just walked through a lemon grove barefoot :). Love it. Keep on going!
person smmz79
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh a farmers market what a great way for draco to get to see all varieties of 'muggles'.... loved this chap esp the beach and front porch scenes.... can not wait for te next chap great job as always....
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Sod the tea." OMG OMG your writing is so good it should be a sin, I love this story already and I love your characters already this hermione and draco is really gonna do cartwheels. I am only up to cahpter 2 and I am already blushing like an anime virgin, and we all know I am not after reading "not all that glitters is gold". It was hot so far and it had me sweating so onto chapter 3 and what I really like about from your previous stories u r not shy about smut.

Respect
Scarlet
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well if u said u never wrote the sensual stuff i would say r lying beacuse i feel of the sofa reading that little scene in chap3 omg i died i really did, my cuz had to kick me in the arse to revive me, congrats on sensuality.
person smmz79
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh what a sweet chap... i loved it and it was funny i laughed so hard i thought i was going to wet myself when he fell on his ass when he was trying to get into the car.... great job i can not wait to read what their day will involve