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by ricerabbit

schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 8 & 9
first of i am so angry i seeing beyond red, i got such a headache reading these last two chapters. I hate u by the way for making it this way *evilly tackles ricerabbit and sits on top of her*. First of all I think hermione looked for all the shit she got, first off playing the love sick puppy and allowing him to take her to the party in the first place and being all doe eyed and shit, letting him dictate the details of the affair especially when she knows he was with so many other witches and contacting her when it convient. Secondly she should have expected everything that was malfoy and she should killed him not just slap him, and she does seem like a slag after FUCKING him again although that scene was throuoghly spicy. IT is all her fault she not have let him have his way with her, although my heart broke for her. She too stupid although my i was disgusted by the evil things malfoy said to her, and i believe him, if he ever felt anything for hermione besides lust he would even think to shag pansy while out with her. Oh lord and dont them come all lovely dovey after this please cuz that would suck. Great work

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Scarlet
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 10
is ginny daft trying to play match maker now when before she didnt like him, and hells what is wrong with hermione still being soft and thinking bout him after all those things he did and said to her, has she forgotten, she needs a new man. The girl needs to listen to some beyonce. You know what song I am talking bout...lol
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 11
interesting very interesting. And hell yes I want to read this from draco's POV. Hell yes
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 12
all that drama *shakes head*
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic
Love his description of when he first sees her
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to read his thoughts on this story.

i am very intriged. I will be watching. lol
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great idea!!! I am already liking the story from his POV. Thanks!! HG4eva
person apolla92
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was one of the best fics i have ever read! it was beautifully written and i couldn't take my eyes away for the screen! that was absolutely lovely, i can't describe how brilliant it was. i loved it, wasted about half my sunday reading it but it was worth the time. keep up the awesome work i can't wait to read more from you!
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! Thanks for not making this just a rehash of previous dialogue with a different POV, this actually gives more information, interesting details, etc. Well done!
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally loved this story sorry to see it end. but you ended in a romantic and funny way.

Thank you for writting this story, I enjoyed reading it.