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by ricerabbit

schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love Narcissa and bravo... I will love a little bid more Lucius butt kicking from Hermaione perhaps and more Narcissa this is fun..
person Citten
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well lucius is still a piece of work isn't he? well at least narcissa is cool she just wants her son to be happy and if hermione makes him happy all the better! ;) what is up next for draco and how is going to handle things with his father? do post soon i am dying to see what is next! :)
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter...lovely, just lovely. Draco is still in a small state of denial but willing and more open to change.
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where's that Lucius one shot of yours? It was good!! You should put it back up!!

I'm liking his point of view, though he still makes it a point in his head to point out all the things that she doesn't do "up to standard". LOL, me thinks both of them have to come to terms with letting some things go.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!! Thank you for this wonderful story. It was fun, sweet, sexy and a great ride the whole way through. Add that you update so often, and you become the holy grail of fan fic writers! I can't wait to read Draco's perspective!
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your Draco voice. It seems so him, just like Hermione's voice was so her. I'm always happy to see when you've updated this story.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Crookshanks... he's marvelous!

Thanks again for not doubling over material.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Draco has been plagued with thoughts of gorgeous Granger. I'm surprised you didn't have Draco mention the scar in this chapter. You never mentioned it in Hermione's POV until he said something during that vicious arguement (which I still haven't fully forgiven him for). I'm glad he's not been sleeping well for four weeks, you'd think he'd realize that he likes her more and she's different. The idiot. Onward!

PS: Love the little interlude with his neighbor.
PPS: Don't be mad RR, but I know you don't have a beta so can you give the chappies a quick read through before posting. I was totally confused by Narcissa's "Girls are not stupid" speech due to the typos, I totally missed her point....*ducks quickly from the flying vase and offers cookies and milk*
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
--margaritama

I edited it just now. That's what I get for writing chapter in the middle of the night when I'm knackered. LOL. I could always chalk it up to Draco hearing bits and pieces of her conversation; and, thus, making it sound confusing but I'm not that lazy. LOL.

As for the scar bit, it is quite a sensitive subject for Hermione - thus she never thinks of it - but Draco will mention it later on. He was too consumed with how confused he is about her to really notice it. But notice it he shall!

Thanks for your comment =)
person Citten
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have to say i LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am so very much looking forward to the coming chapter to let us see what draco was thinking and doing through all this! :) my only complant is that i hate that you have ended the story with the wedding! (unless you are planning a sequel?--if not i may bug you for one ;) i so hope that you are planning one!) i do hope all is well and that you will be posting and soon!!!!!!!!!! :)