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person GabrielAiden
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love finding a fanfic that holds your attention. :D I especially like finding one with an interesting plot line to it! I can't wait to read more!!!

Gabriel

ps- I have an idea for the killer and I can't wait to see if I'm right! or wrong, its more fun that way. ;)
person Kuromei
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Imperius Curse. It had to be. O__O ... Am I spelling it wrong? I can't remember the name of the spell, all of a sudden, but I DO know there was a spell to turn people into living puppets! DX Question is, who is the puppetmaster? *waits to find out*

Moving on, it's amazing that Harry's putting so much on Pansy's shoulders. I can only hope she makes the right choice in the end. Oh, yeah, and lovin' in the bathtub is always for the win. X3 *hugs Dream-sama*
person Snivelly
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, is Pansy being controlled? Is Millie controlling her?! Is Crabbe or Goyle? Is it the Cat in the Hat? Omg, I hope she makes the right decision! Gah, now I'm all jittery and excited for the next chapter :O

Lol at Harry's practice time in the tub. He's so cute when he's unsure about something. And Draco's so hot when he's....well, always. Draco's just bloody hot xD I could really see that whole tub scene, btw. It was described very well ^_^

Can't wait for moreee!
person Polka dot
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For a smart boy, he's sorta stupid to put his life in Parkinson's hands (or her conscience).
person MewMew2
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 is very well put together. You have given the reader ample time to put it together, assign motive and method both so here's the time to put it all to the test. Thank you for finding the time to update once more, please do so again when convenient.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly!!! I soooo need chapter 14!!! Harry just put his life in Pansy's hands!!!
person dana_aeryn
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing chapter. Looking forward to findingo ut who is really behind the attacks.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH I think I know what is happening. I won't say anything because I don't want to ruin it for anyone else. Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the update;)
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wao....the long waited moment...I cannot believe they finally did it....and I really have to admit...these last 3 charpters are juust so wonderfully sweet and beautifully done...absolutely loving it...and honestly, even with the fight scence...it just so rightfully done...you just make me fell in love with Draco even more...of course...little Harry just cute.....cannot wait to see the next charpter....thanks for the great work and please keep it up.
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I am a little new to your story as I started reading it only yesterday. However, it is indeed the most brilliantly written story I have yet encountered. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!